snailtm3's manga / #bl(233)

cute

cutee

cutee. mad inaccurate to reality of yakuza tho can’t lie, like how did asuka fr just solve like all the issues going on w the yakuza clan in ao's town with the power of words? like bffr lmfao. i kinda felt a lil weird abt the age gap but im glad ao at least didn't see asuka grow up like that and saw him 12 yrs later when he was 18.

it was okay. i wish the only focused on the mains and showed them as they became older bc their character designs were so good when they were older omg. i didnt like the selfcest chap where the older!main couple had a 4some w the younger!main couple bc like... even if that's yall, yall are minors here hello??? v cool how the older versions of the MCs are from the author's zombie work tho. the one-two shot side pairings were meh. i was fine w the childhood friends, they were cute; but the pairing of the bartender and the customer was too non-conny for me. i hate how the customer was always groping him and harassing him. like there’s flirting and then there’s harassment and he definitely falls under the latter.

potential in the concept but dont like how it was executed. why is the mc listening in on his big bro having sex w his bf? like bro ewww. also dont like that man who's 25 like bro why are you interested in literal minors who are 10 years younger than you at your big age? also damn seeing comments abt how the mc is gonna end up w hina instead of one of the suitors… natsuhi deserved to win that’s all i gotta say. no hate to hina bc i do fw the childhood friends troupe but damn natsuhi and akira were so cute. it’s the way natsuki already accepted akira as family anyways. lwky gotta adopt natsuhi and akira as ocs and imagine their story out myself bc damn… ALSO WHY DID MAKOTO JUST NOT CARE THAT TOUMA WAS TRYING TO RIZZ UP HIS LIL BRO??? bro practically helped raise him but he doesn’t care that a 25-year old man is actively tryna fuck his little bro???? dick fr changes mfs. update read chap 13: BRO IS HARUKI ACTUALLY STARTING TO HAVE FEELINGS FOR AKIRA??? YOURE DATING HIS OLDER BRO WHY IS THIS BITCH KEEPING IT IN THE FAMILY… also the way makoto (or shin now ig? name change happened) was acting when akira brought up haruki scares me bc it’s the way his face instantly becomes darker/angry like as if he’s jealous or sumn. author i am begging you to not put incest in this bitch we do not want or need it update: oh okay so makoto was just jealous and pissed off that his bf was being weird towards his brother (so understandable fr) but they made up and haruki was like “nah im all abt you baby fr!!” so now they’re good and not acting weird towards the mc. now the student council president is kinda taking interest in the mc in a weird way to fuck w his lil bro (natsuhi) tho and i do not like it… 1) he’s p much using akira as a replacement for makoto and 2) i was fw the big bro dynamic he had going on w akira and how akira was basically an honorary member of the aogiri fam… prob only going to read natsuhi’s end for this bc he was the one i was routing to be w akira the most

the random 4D chess plot line reveal that the omega guy did was kinda crazy but overall a decent read. i liked the main pairing’s workplace rivalry they had going on.

bro masturbating in the club room was insane lmao… like bro pls do that shit at home. this was fr a story of all time

THIS WAS SO CUTE IM SO DEAD. the bouquet…

this was cute

SO CUTE IM SO DEAD.