snailtm3's manga / #fire character writing(35)

THIS WAS SO GOOD IN TERMS OF PLOT. i honestly am more interested in their dynamic than the main pairing of majo to neko. i would love to read more of them; praying for a 2nd volume…

this shit was fire asf. i love the world building and this universe’s take on witches. the plot developments were well paced for such a short manga and the relationship development between the mcs was sweet to watch. rly enjoyed reading this. ALSO THE ART WAS BEAUTIFUL !! porn was so tasteful too damn.

ONLY OMEGAVERSE EVER WTF?? it’s the way the characters are written for me. karlyle’s character development and how he’s portrayed in the story is so good. you can see his journey in how he begins to open up more and genuinely fall in love w ash and it’s just so wow. i love this manhwa sm. ALSO THE LANGUAGE USAGE DURING THE TIME WHEN KARLYLE AND ASH PARTED WAYS. karlyle going back to how he always used to live but his entire world feeling so cold and depressing bc ash taught him what living in the sun and being in love was like. what if i kms? genuinely so good wtf. GOD THEM FINALLY GETTING TOGETHER. ugh. guh. so sweet. so fire bruh. update: finished tbh the last 4 chaps of ash’s rut arc was kinda crazy to me bc the sex was so diff from how they usually do it but i mean ash was in rut and there was aftercare so it wasn’t the worst.

THIS SHIT WAS SO FIRE️️ the world building was good and i like how the omegaverse isn’t the sole defining plot point of the story. oftentimes omegaverse stories place too much emphasis on the abo aspect, but it rly took the backseat for this story and it was nice. i was iffy abt the age gap between khalid and ilya but imma let it slide bc 1) ilya didn’t see khalid for 8 yrs so it’s not like he watched khalid grow up and 2) it was an arranged marriage so it wasn’t like of ilya’s choice to marry a kid

this was like tragic asf but tbh the world building and storytelling was p decent from what i remember

SO CUTE IM SO DEAD.

i feel weird that the ML is a high schooler when the MC first meets him. like the story is not bad for an omegaverse and the romance is cute but goddamn why did yall let them meet when he’s a 2nd year and not at the v least a 3rd yr so he’d be 18… i can’t fully enjoy the story bc thinking abt it weirds me tf out fr… the volumes when hazuki is an adult are all v cute and domestic tho

finally finished this after years and i rly liked it! the world building and journey of desir was really satisfying. i like how desir was op bc he knew what was going to happen but not ridiculously op (well until the v end) bc he still had restrictions due to his innate mana circle level. my fave arc was the second major shadow world desir and the gang cleared. that shit actually had me emotional asf. pram and kei… didn’t care for the love triangle fight thing they made romantics and ajest do but if i ignore that i ultimately don’t have any major gripes abt this series. !! MAJOR SPOILERS !! ALSO WHEN ZOD DIED. i died. he was my favorite character… THE WAY HE SAW DESIR AS A SON??? actually killed my grandma. their bond was so close… desir’s crash out was so justified. SPOILERS END aaa just a really good fantasy action manhwa. i highly recommend fr.

such an interesting plot, i’m rly interested in seeing where this goes.