snailtm3's manga / #fire plot developments(15)

this shit was fire asf. i love the world building and this universe’s take on witches. the plot developments were well paced for such a short manga and the relationship development between the mcs was sweet to watch. rly enjoyed reading this. ALSO THE ART WAS BEAUTIFUL !! porn was so tasteful too damn.

THIS SHIT WAS SO FIRE️️ the world building was good and i like how the omegaverse isn’t the sole defining plot point of the story. oftentimes omegaverse stories place too much emphasis on the abo aspect, but it rly took the backseat for this story and it was nice. i was iffy abt the age gap between khalid and ilya but imma let it slide bc 1) ilya didn’t see khalid for 8 yrs so it’s not like he watched khalid grow up and 2) it was an arranged marriage so it wasn’t like of ilya’s choice to marry a kid

i liked it! i liked how they included aboriginal mythology in this a lot! i’ve never actually heard of any aboriginal mythology or folklore so even tho it was only a concept from it, it definitely intrigued and piked my interest to learn more. the ending was really sweet and i liked how we got to see woochan’s growth as a person + reconciliation w his father. him becoming a director and making a film based off of their love story was v endearing, and said film also winning a reward? truly a love wins moment fr! however, i didn’t like how hye-eun tried to victimize herself in the story like she didn’t cheat on minjae and have him find out through fucking dispatch

SO CUTE IM SO DEAD.