cocobunny's manga / #smut(98)

So good but only 2 ch! Insane plot twist: Bad End!

THE AUTHOR LITERALLY ABANDONED THEIR STORY AT CH 30.5 DO NOT FUCKING REREAD DROPPED AT THE ABSOLUTE WORST CLIFFHANGER WTF (The Seme was abusive and controlling and obsessive af and uke was a docile little coward who was so in love with the seme. They are half brothers. But after Seme got attacked and developed amnesia, he became so soft and kind towards uke it was kinda jarring honestly. Pacing then felt off. Uke then finally decides to leave seme after a rando side couple came in and tried to pretend seme was one of their lover (revenge side plot by the weird uke of that side couple). Uke felt dejected and foolish trying to play lovers with a man who, prior to amnesia, treated him as nothing more than a personal toy he could command. But them Seme goes thru some depression bc the uke has been gone for 4 days and his memories are coming back bits and pieces and he is slowly starting to realize he actually loves the uke too. His bff (who seme has loved in the past but the bff rejected him many times and the uke is actually jealous of the bff) tried to comfort him and reassure him that they’ll find the uke. But then the uke comes back at the worst timing and sees them together. Left off at this shitty cliffhanger

3 way lmfao. Heonjae is better than the main ML imo. Left off ch 21 when Heonjae is finallly about to get sum!!!

Fantastic. Youshiden is obsessed and stalks Denji (apparently Canon LMFAO) and he slowly becomes interested in Denji. Some sexy smut happens. VERY GOOD 10/10

Pretty good! Though Seme IS obsessive over Uke, we dont realize this until later on. Even then, its not explicitly stated. We just see Seme overly care for Uke beyond being just a father-figure. Uke falls for Seme early in life bc Seme was so kind to him (well duh bc Seme took on the role of raising him and uke had hemophilia so he basically needed to be doted on and watched all his life). Kinda weird that seme basically raised uke like a father but then developed these feelings for him at some point. Seme goes far in that he also asks uke to call him daddy while having sex lmao. Seme is unhinged but not too overly crazy. Thus its 4/5. Would have been nice if it was longer and we got to see when exactly seme stopped looking at uke as a child and began seeing him in a more lustful gaze, also if we got to see seme be more obsessively crazy

pretty good :9

left off ch 12 when uke finally escapes but he calls his home and realizes they dont miss him. looks like it breaks his heart and he mag just go back to his kidnapper lol. Kidnapper wants to torture and rape uke bc he kept the scholarship that he help uke didnt need cuz he is rich (lottle does he know that uke had an abusive father who expected much from him—so OF COURSE he needed the scholarship). so dude kidnaps uke and rapes and tortures him crazy for like a month. Uke slowly starts to enjoy it and develop stockholm syndrome lmao. Doesnt gelp that kidnapper “rewards” him somewhat by giving him real food and not raping as much and cleaning him….. but kidnapper looks annoyed, angry, and pissed off by this development cuz he high key HATES the uke lol

Left off ch 8 … after the jerjer (took ukes virginity) its ok i guess lol. Now kinda boring idk may continue at another date. Seme is a fallen angel and is as good as dead unless he can get a human soul. He finds uke about to commit suicide and saves him. Uke reveals he wanted to kill himself bc he had a stalker and he was tired of getting bullied. Seme makes a deal contract w him: He’ll take care of the stalker (get rid of him) and in exchange uke will give him his soul. Uke reluctantly agrees. Seme tells him the entire soul wont be given right away, just bits and pieces. And something the seme doesnt tell him, is that soul giving only happens via kissing. Seme tells uke to live with him since the stalker knows where uke lives. Uke reluctantly agrees. But the seme is kinda an asshole who only cares for himself, so he tricks the uke into having sex w him the first night lmao by telling him hey kissing means u give me ur soul and that means having sex w me means more soul and i can get rid of ur stalker faster~ Seme was just horny. Lol. Also, seme is only using uke. But during jerjer, seme REALLY liked how soft and tight uke was. He left marks all over him too. Sooo seme may start getting possessive over the uke lol