supremecurt's manga / #multiple couples(321)

uhh it's supposedly cute but it's too cliché lol

This was such a weird compilation. The first two stories were connected, but the other oneshots didn't follow a theme, so everything felt horribly disjointed. There was even a random two paged oneshot that came out 9f nowhere. Would've been enjoyable if this was organized. See how weird my tags are? lol Tbh Ch 8 is the best imo but it's so out of theme it should be in a separate compilation (it can even grow with more chapters).

I like the pacing of this one. I can actually feel Nodate's confusion. The confrontation and the inner monologue are happening simultaneously. I quite like that. Btw the common theme: a character who pretends for everyone else but there's another character where they can just be themselves and stop putting on an act.

There's also butt fetish here but it didn't play a huge role to the storyline at all lol. Anyway, I didn't like the character development. Idk it's like it got dragged on too long and the resolution is too quick. They need to fix their jealousy issues lol.

Why did the second story end up like that??? It ended just when it was starting, what a letdown. It had potential, damn it. I was waiting to see actual character development, that ending stopped at realization. I still like it anyway, but I wish it was longer. (I read the author's notes and it seems she's thought of that end for a long time, I kinda forgive her now lol) The third story has an interesting setup. Guy brings his partner to the countryside since he's being possessive. He actually "stole" his partner from a girl before so he's scared it might happen to him, too. The story is told through his POV, it's an interesting setup.

I enjoyed the oneshots more. The main story is... idk I just stayed for the art lol. This author is better off making PWP or oneshots tbh.

I don't like the dialogue, too many unnecessary words lol. The last story has a continuation in Ch5 of Asanaga Fuugetsu, which was still lackluster lol

I LOVE THIS SO MUCH

ch2: wow, mentioning gravity while having sex lmao wait omg i could relate to the uke in ch4 loool ch6 is cute tbh im not a huge fan of the characterization lol dont expect much substance to this. it's something you read to pass time kinda thing