apit13's manga / #***(110)

fin; lmao bl school. this story doesnt make sense, but then again, lot of pwp based stories dont make sense.

fin; i mean, its nice to read, but its... weird.

fin; its... just so-so.

fin; the start is quite good, but thats it. niichan story was unnecessary.

up to ch5; not that good tbh. its all over the place.

fin; up to ch14; the premise is good but theres no plot whatsoever. its basically just a will they wont they story.

fin; theres this guy whos been sexting with a seemingly cute texter, but is actually a scary looking dude. its an okay story.

fin; its more like, how do i say it, a fall in lust story. theres almost no plot.

fin; up to ch60; wow, this is a dark story. lots of sex, deals with prostitution. end of first part really took a turn with the (near) assassination and betrayal from the assistant. and the second part feels like a different story altogether. idk.

fin; its going too fast imo. the characters feels like one dimensional, and theres a misunderstanding near the end.