Tonari No Danshi
Nonchan To Watashi
Kimi No Hada O Kowasu Yoru
3 chaps/ 2 stories (1 one shot and 1 w/ 2 chaps) - I have mixed feelings about these stories. Both have the characters in bed together before any true relationship is established which is foolish, but both stories were also very deep, emotional and well drawn. I appreciate that, even if I don't respect the other.
Takane to Hana
Sakura Ryou March
3 chaps - Can get angsty, but ends well, thanks to the girl. Get frustrated with boys that can't recognize that "doing things" is not "everything". In a serious relationship, doing the hard things "together" is what love is about! At least find out if the girl wants to explore that option with you before you give her up. How about 'home is where the heart is.' Ever think of that?
Blanc Marie
One shot - what I'm trying to figure out is if the 'husband' was THAT bad, how in the world did the relationship ever advance as far as a formal wedding without his insincerity being discovered/recognized before hand. Premise is a little lame, but to my mind, the brother was never announced as a proxy, so the vows witnessed and given were his. Correcting the paperwork is just a legal formality.
Knight Flyer