Amita4ever's manga / #Love(564)

12chaps...+ (Oct 2016) - The first chap was cute, but it never seemed to take off. Might have been something lacjking in trasnlation, but it was missing tomething.

One shot - Not impossible, but certainly a dark twist. I guess I prefer the positive, because I didn't enjoy this one.

1 chap (June 2016) - It's cute. Definitely has a Nike/Livi feel to it, and there is even a Livi resemblance, but there is enough of a difference in the theme that it might shake that if it went on. Shame there is only one chap so far.

Gee, glad they managed to get THAT cleared up. Wonder if they got their advice from the same person *rolls eyes*. Considering the first words out of his mouth were hateful, was that suppose the be 'love at first sight'? He never even TRIED to be liked. Kinda sorry if you ask me.

13 chaps (Jan 2017) - Interesting premise, and somewhat extreme characters (with their own reasons), but starting to shift in a positive direction. Looking forward to more.

one shot - Eh *shrug*. Moderately cute, but with the message is realistic - a wife does need to know/hear her husband loves her.

4 chaps - the plot was predictable, but the story was really sweet. The other thing is it wasn't rushed. 4 chaps was just about right, although a few pages of follow up would have been swell. When we hit ' The End' our little maid was looking a little nervous, although not without good reason - haha.

3 stories - The first - 5 star!!! I added it to my album of FAVORITE SINGLES. The second earned a 3. It would have got a four if our sweet little protagonist hadn't jumped the gun. The star rating also accurately represents your potential need for a tissue. The last... 2 stars... maybe. The art was decent, but t I didn't enjoy it. Creepy is a good adjective.

Quick read with a happy ending, but nothing outstanding.

The plot would have easily supported a longer or more in depth story, and left me with a few nagging questions, but other than that, I really enjoyed the art and the story.