Crispy_Robin's manga / #multiple couples(74)

Would have loved it more if all the couples story had more to it(눈‸눈) I loved the first couple....they were cute....It just felt that uke's feeling were rushed....would have loved it more if his feeling took time to form....it didn't feel as if he loved the seme...but r8 after the seme confessed it was showed that he fell in love with him....it felt really weird(=_=) The second couple was really cute....I wanted more of it....the saddest part was it had only one chap(╥﹏╥) The third one also felt rushed...would have loved it more if their story had more chaps...and the relationship took time to form(ರ╭╮ರ)

It was fine.....wanted drama in all of them but none had(there was potential to it) Didn't like the first story that much.....the uke's feeling felt really rushed....from the first till the moment they started dating, everything seemed to happen sooo fast....would have been better if it was a lil slow paced....liked the punishment plot but it felt it wasn't executed well...it felt the uke was like forced to like it and all....which felt weird.... The second story was really good....after the confession when the uke was avoiding the seme(the uke was sorting out all of his previous relationship)....the prob was solved really easily.....wanted a lil drama to go on.... The third story was really good....hate the fact that it was one shot.....would have loved to see more of it....

It was very good.... Liked the main story....that was really cute.....but loved the one shot more...I wanted more of that....would have been great if there was another story about them....also should have shown how the uke got his heart broken before(the story have love rash which appears Infront of someone u love....and well it would appear infront of the seme and seme didn't wanna trust anyone with love rash because apparently he was heartbroken in the past because of that but never was elaborated on it....it was an one shot after all).....the main couple was very good too....it was nice seeing how the uke was in love with the seme for long and would like always hear the seme talking about his love life.....kinda felt frustrating when the seme kept going back and forth in his thought whether he loved the uke or not .....like he thought what he felt for uke was love at one moment and the next he wasn't sure what it was(kinda understandable too since he stopped feeling love from age 8 when he got love rash and well started taking medicine which inhibit his feeling of love to surface.....and then it got all clear to him when he heard from uke's mom that he got the rash in the first place bcz of uke....and he had forgotten that b4)....really wanted to see their parents reaction to them dating(I wanted the parents to go something along the line we have always known u would be together.....like they have been childhood frnds and have hung out with each other like forever)

I was very good and super cute.....loved both the couple... The first couple was cute.....but I wanted some more drama between them......I just felt like they reconciled really fast after the uke told the seme he hated him(the uke can control weather....and if he is sad he unconsciously cause natural disaster....so he wanted to keep distance with the seme)......also wanted the uke to tell seme that he loves him directly.....and wanted to see him being flirty,(｡ŏ﹏ŏ)....it gave "bending the spoon" vibe The second story was also cute....I just ended up crying even tho it wasn't a sad manga(｡•́︿•̀｡) ....the way the uke just went out cause he thought the seme looked scary and when the seme came to know about it his sad face just ended making me sad a lot..... honestly speaking I wanted it to have more chap where the seme just try to keep himself calm and say to himself that the uke doesn't love him....and I also wanted to see more of the uke being misunderstood.....the part where he thought the seme was avoiding him and that he got in with someone cause he decided to stop loving the uke I wanted it to have more....I just wanted to see them suffer more( ≧Д≦)

It was fine.....liked the second couple more than the first couple.... The first couple seemed a little off idk y....I mean I do like the scenery that the uke have always wanted to change and the seme made it possible....but the fact that for the uke his childhood friend was everything yet he didn't love him just rubbed the wrong way....I did like the opposite attract side of the couple(the uke was gloomy, unsocial type of guy whereas the seme was bright,social type of guy) still it just didn't feel good....I mean when the uke got stuck in a dark place and thought that no one would save him, his friend came and rescue him....his friend also seemed really friendly type of guy and they were always together.....for the uke his friend was everything....so not falling for him instead falling for the seme seemed bit off... The second couple was good....wanted more of it tbh.....actually would have loved it there was something from seme's POV....like we just didn't know how the seme fell in love with the uke....wanted to know that....also would have loved if they had more interaction before the uke fell in love with him...just lacked some depth....if it had more chaps then it would have been better

It was good and cute.....would have loved it wayyy more if the second couple had more scenes and wish they had a spin-off The first couple was cute.....just didn't feel much attachment to it as if something was missing..... didn't like how the seme just went and kissed the uke in the first chap(I wanted it to be a unrequited love type of story) but didn't hate the way it turned out.....would have liked it more if it turned out like that but still it was good The second couple was really good.....y is it only one chapter???(ŏ﹏ŏ)...I want to see more of them(´;︵;`)

It was good....but I like the brother's story more.... The main couple's story felt really rushed.... everything just happened fast....it just didn't feel much enjoyable Liked the brother's story more....wanted more of it tbh....would have loved it more if it was actually more of an unrequited type of love(like the seme would be in love with each other for a long time and would feel sad and all...)....but then again it was really good and hoped there was more of their story

It was good.... The first couple was cute but I actually didn't like how the second chapter went on....like even after they had sex and kinda confessed but still it was as if he didn't consider each other lover(didn't like that part).... The second couple was good but didn't go the way it went....when the first chapter went it felt as if the uke was a little bit sadist.....hoped that he would turn out like that actually(teasing the seme and being kind to everyone) but then in the second chapter it was as if he was no more sadist but rather a bad type of guy....like he was pushing the seme to another girl even after knowing the seme's feeling and after having a sex with him(thinking the seme was really cute)....I just wanted to see the uke teasing the seme a lot but it didn't happen....and then after that I wanted the uke to suffer a little considering he pushed the seme to another girl but it just went directly (like the uke realized he was in love with the seme and just proposed him and done...it just didn't feel right)

It was good.... The first couple was good and their story was good too.....but hoped that when the seme was avoiding the uke and at that he was out having dinner party with his co-workers, the uke would see that specially when the seme was coming out of a restaurant with one of his female co-workers....it would have been awesome if the uke had a wrong idea..... Didn't like the seme's character at first(of the second couple) especially his attitude towards his parents....glad that he had character development.....would have loved to see him introducing the uke to his parents and seeing their reaction

It was very good.... The main couple wasn't really exceptional or anything....altho I didn't understand why the uke approached the seme.....he wasn't actually really scary or anything as said in the rumor about him.....the seme was scared of him for the rumors about him so I understand the seme not being able to reject the uke's approach but the uke's approach didn't make sense....would have liked it more if there was a chapter from seme's POV.....and I actually didn't expect the senpai to be the uke....he was more seme-like.... Really liked the second couple....the seme is awesome....I just love his characteristics.....wanted to see more of them....I loved how when the uke was proposed by someone and then the seme told him to give it a try(altho at that time the seme loved the uke and he had already proposed to him)....loved the uke's reaction at that time(he got angry at the seme for saying to give that a try) and the most awesome part was when seme's friend asked what would happen if the uke got well with the girl....the seme replied that he would be super depressed....that part was just awesome.... Loved the third couple too....hoped that it had more chapters....the story was really small tbh....But liked it