ReviewRaptor's manga / #GORGEOUS Character(s)(764)

Okay, while the base plot (for the millionth time) is GOOD...it turned to shit later on. All of a sudden (as if chapters were missing or someone cut parts out of them OR just random SUPRISE DRAMA STUFF from the author's part)...the mentally not-all-okay uke turns into a batshit crazy fucker with absolutely ZEROzero logic. I get that you want him to be a bit antisocial, messed up and whatnot...but seriously? Out of the blue you come with a 'Oh yeah, he's gonna beat the living shit out of the little brother, that we NEVER heard anything about except existing and he's probably gonna kill him too, not sure, and give his mangled body in a suitcase to his wannabe lover!'. WTF is wrong with you and what drugs were you on to have THIS kinda surprise happening make any fucking sense??? Someone either didn't give a shit, didn't know how goddamn idiotic this was or they just don't know how to write in general. It was good until that part, it would have made sense to use the fucked up TWIN to use this scene, to scare the wannabe lover away. But it makes zero sense for what the uke/main character was like (mentally and in terms of personality) up until then. It's like you got a sudden change of heart and REWROTE his entire personality. At least drop and remake the story then, don't just shove it in there and act like it's normal and sensical. TF. At this point I'll only keep flipping pages to see the smex and fighting scenes and IF or if not the uke will actually reveal what horrible things he's done to his lover's brother...and if there will be ANY sensical reaction towards it. It's not worth the read after the chapter of a black-haired boy being compared in looks to someone. Either read up to there and then leave or just start reading for the smut scenes only, because a good story is nowhere to be found after that point. Sadly. Promising at first, but another disappointment I cannot recommend. The art can't save the shit plot.