ReviewRaptor's manga / #GORGEOUS Character(s)(754)

The writing of this feels really off. I could forgive the very obnoxious back and forth from past to present and rinse and repeat, over and over and OVER (without getting to the point in a good manner), but even that becomes unforgivable since it drags on for so long. What bothers me most is the absolute misuse of that AND the miscommunication trope tho. As well as the character behavior: Both of them come across like acting to create a specific moment rather than a moment happening due to them behaving as the person they are. If that makes sense? It feels forced, shoe-horned and random at times even. As if the script didn't think through how to get to the next happening, but we had to get there, so we'll just force it within moments. Both the MC and the ML have personalities that seem bland, again, as if their behavior is rooted in creating the next happening rather than a flowing and cohesive personality. It's just strange. Tho the back and forth without getting anywhere and the annoying misunderstandings really does not help get a real feel for their actual perosnality. It's an interesting story at the core, but the execution is anything but good. And I am certainly not a fan of the main plot basically being miscommunication/misunderstandings galore in and of itself, everything around is basically just a garnish. Not really my thing due to these issues just overstaying their welcome WAY too much. But maybe you can enjoy it. The art is decent, tho I noticed the artist has an issue with not being able to portray some expressions. But i know people can forgive that easily. Check it out, give it a try. It's too annoying for my taste, but maybe you won't mind.

First of all: This was an unexcpected ride. I need MUCH more semes/tops/MLs with his kind of personality. That was such a nice change to what we usually see. XD Very minor spoiler-ish things mentioned, so beware. The story is definitely a casual, light read, nothing to get overly realistic about. And it does it's job well in that. The only issue I find is that they could have worked on the MLs supposed social anxiety more before he switches up (especially the jump to acting that was way too sudden kinda). Tho even the MC could have had a better transition for no interest to horny at the beginning. Tho it DID make for a funny shocking surpise turn of events. I gotta admit that caught me off guard, as did the MLs personality when it happened. His expression and dialogue made me laugh. XD They are both lovely characters, the story is interesting and even the surrounding characters are all precious (wish there was more screentime for them tho, the manager was hilarious at the beginning). Definitely recommended. Has it's issues but nothing major. And both characters are fully likable, so it's a nice nice all-round if you're not looking for 100% perfection and deep topics. :)

I'll make it short: wholesome, interesting, cute romance, good art and love the delinquent factor since it brings in some action and more comedy moments. XD A great read, especially since this is a light read and not some deep story attempt. COULD have been a bit longer tho. I would have loved to see more of all these characters. Oh, and the random side(?) couple being a switch was nice. Was like encountering a unicorn. :) Kinda wish it would have been about the delinquent group bosses instead tho. I think they could make a fun couple with exactly that relationship dynamic too. XD

First things first, alternate title of this is: HORNY JAIL HIGHSCHOOLER This was a worth read, the comedy and art paired with it is definitely the highlight of this comic tho. I can't stop laughing at the dumbness and expressions. XD The romance is ok, but the main focus is DEFINITELY comedy and it just being a literal 'horny jail' themed fun little read. Which is exactly what you should treat it as; a comedy, not a realistic story to get emotionally invested in or such. If judging the story outside the comedy factor, it's very odd since it's so random, even with the happy ending. But the comedy factor makes it work regardless. So I wouldn't say it's a clear fault/issue. :) The only thing I can really name as an issue to me is that the ending is not as impactful compared to the comedy before? It might have been that way to me because the comedy was so impactful compared to the feeling parts, but I'm not sure. Maybe it was just too short to unfold it's impact well. Definitely worth reading, if you need a laugh or a bit of a time waster that's actually memorable, this will be to your liking. Recommended for sure, so give it a try!

This was way too short, it was SO good! XD This author has great skill when it comes to hilarious comedy moments with perfectly matching expressions/reactions from the characters. 2 comics so far seem worthy of becoming animes. This one is a good read for sure. Short but gold. The story is simple and on point, with a focus on comedy. Worth every moment, but that's it: It's WAY too short! I want more! ╥△╥

The main story is really nice. I like the characters and their romance and behavior. Simple, sweet and to the point. But I would have loved to see more of them. Tho I guess that's not a must if the story really IS simple as that. So it's fine by me. ^^ The second story had me switch back n forth between WTF and the usual gleeful cheering for a funny delinquent story. I really LOVE the action parts and deeper dialogue moments but the constant mention with the shitting situation just to see a glimpse of his face threw me off each time. I am NOT into that stuff. But it definitely was funny. XD

Somehow the story feels unfinished to me. The plot was going well but the conclusion just happened somehow too swiftly, then it was just happy ending, here's the credits. This would have benefitted more from the MC actually going through a smal arc of realizing his feelings more and them having a conversation before bonking and the credits rolling in. The base story is nice, something new tbh. We rarely get to see an office worker top being a total slut and just being SO casual about it, like some men simply are irl. He feels realistic in that sense. His persistence is bordering between stalker and eccentric(?) and that makes him quite unique. XD I love the love interest but I wish we could have seen him more vulnerable and opening up, maybe actually crying and telling his story before the credits roll. That would have been perfect for the small, heavy feeling moments that we got with him. It's flawed for sure, but I think it could have been great with a bit of adjustments. Definitely like it tho, despite it being smut heavy. Tho it IS well balanced between smut and actual story. That is a big plus, want more of this in comics tbh. Recommended for a casual read with lots of smut in it but also some story, but don't try to look for anything deep and detailed.