ReviewRaptor's manga / #NOT INTERESTED(282)

I really fucking hate the trend of choosing a great artist for the first chapter (not just cover, yes, the chapter) and then hiring a mediocre one for the actual chapters. It's like making a commercial to have people want to buy a Ferrari and you end up giving them a VW Golf after they came over... fu

Half-assed plot that rushes through important parts as early as chapter 4 to 6 just to get 'tO tHe ImPoRtAnT pArT'. Dropped because the writer didn't bother putting effort into decent writing. Instead of focusing on telling the story and making emotions and thoughts come across, they skipped literally EVERYTHING. Emotions, years of happenings that are only mentioned when we're suddenly supposed to have them matter. This is just shitty writing. It was interesting given the setup, but they totally butchered it.

It's the exact same plot as another webtoon, but with incredibly rushed and half-assed writing as well as VERY half-assed art and asset use. It's really not interesting. The parts that WOULD be interesting, the writer just horribly rushed over and the ones you could rush over (uuuuhhh tactical merchant/development of the country talks ooooo how SUPER interesting...) they talk for AGES about stuff you could start and then fade out, because it is simply NOT relevant to the story AT ALL. It's also not interesting and it really doesn't show how special the MCs thinking is...all which needs to be a given for this to be so dragged out and make it necessary... It's just not good. Maybe for new readers of stories with little to no experience with actual good writing, but not for experienced readers. You can use it as a page-flicker if you're REAL bored, but to me personally there is zero that will keep me reading. The characters aren't interesting, the story got boring real quick and seeing as the writing is so mediocre it generally doesn't interest me to see the next chapter...and that was laready the case after the 3rd chapter, mind you. You do you, but this gets a hard pass from me.

I find myself completely bored and entirely uninterested at chapter 31 already. The base plot is a great idea and interesting, but the execution is very amateur-ish and almost child-like the way scenarios are written. Things are rushed, emotions or sense of urgency are not delivered properly, all while some parts are dragged out in dialogue that I really couldn't care less about since the characters are just not interesting but just annoying. It might be a good read for new readers or people who are bored. But for those with interest in well-written, well fleshed out and interesting writing...this isn't it. Even as a page-flicker I don't see this working since there is not gonna be a definite goal to flip through for (a kiss for romances, marriage for a trouble couple plot, etc.). It's just not interesting and if you have experience with writing, you can already tell this story will drag on and on and only reach a mildly satisfying goal (since the goal of the MC is NOT a big one to begin with). I'll drop this and give it a hard pass on all fronts. Not even the art can save it, it's mid really. Give it a try, but be warned if you have higher standards when it comes to stories. That's really all I can say.

Horribly jumbled, all over the place writing that just rushes around in zigzag lines. Even in the FIRST chapter already. It's confusing and even the panels don't match a coherent story, so it is NOT the fault of wrong translations (there seem done well). This is just not holding any standard. Maybe for very new readers without much experience this can be a nice read, but if you place value on good writing and coherrent storytelling; look somewhere else. 0 outta 10 - Spare yourself the headache