Soleio's manga / #Manhua/Manhwa(156)

SO GOOD but unfortunately the author discontinued the story

WHY SO SHORT???? WHY??? NÃO TEM MOTIVO PRA SER 1 FUCKING CH!!!!! LINDO SOO BEAUTIFUL,I'M IN LOVE WITH THE PROTAGONIST

Cuteee and funny

SO BORING, ch 14, att: paguei com a língua, I'm enjoying right now, it's good for when you want a easy cute plot, and don't want to think too much att: er.. it's boring again, the magic baby??? Was so random and another baby I don't care , it's nothing I'm just going with the flow rn ..

This could be so much better if (the author) slowed the narrative, Fisrt ; the plot isn't generic and obvious , but what makes me disconnected with the story is that sometimes it feels like there's a lot of cutting scenes all over the chapters, even in the smut scenes , it's all too abruptly , you don't get a sense of beginning, middle or ending it's just there.. don't get me wrong it's super easy to understand even without that but it's so rushed

Boring and cliche ; miscommunication everywhere, typical toxic bl top that doesn't have any personality and moral ... Even the smut is generic..