Achilles's manga / #want more!!!(17)

Damn this was really good. The pace of the story was very good and natural and each scene was well written. The characters were very good too. I love how both fell for each other in the process of their revenge lmao. I love gamer stuff, wish there were more stories like this. Heard there's a novel and I want to buy it. I wasn't expecting for Heejae to be a psycho lmao, quite a surprise. Read it within 2 nights, it got me hooked so bad. Very sad it ended. Fuck Yoona. Love Hyejin and Lala (especially his piercing omgmgmmggmmg)

THIS WAS SO GOOD I love BL that includes games idk why. I also love the trope that they were sucked into the game, a dating sim no less. Pota was very likeable. I loved them both so much I wanted moreeeeee side chapters.

THIS SHIT WAS GOOODODODOD FUCKKKK. I HAD SO MUCH FUN READING. DO JIYOON WAS A CUTIE PATOOTIE. It was kinda insane. Very low-key toxic. Do Jiyoon was a mad fucker frfr. It's good that Jaeha wasn't manipulated tho, he saw through him and still liked the trash lel. I was between giving 4 and 5 stars just because of the abrupt ending. I NEEDED MOREEEE. WHERE IS THE IMPRINTING?? I WAS PROMISED IMPRINTING. FUCK KIM KANGMIN ALL MY HOMIES HATE THAT BITCH. Also is the guiding chief confirmed dead??? Idk. Hopefully. Very good characters, very good story development. Just the end needed tweeking.

THIS WAS TOO GOOD MAN FUCKKK I NEED MOREEEE. I KINDA KNEW FROM SPOILERS THAT JIHOON WASNT AN ACTUAL BAD GUY, BUT I HAD NO IDEA IT WAS A ZOMBIE APOCALYPSE?? FUCK BRO PLSSS I NEED TO SEE THEM MORE. THEYRE BOTH FUCKING INSANE I LOVE THEM.

Debated between 2 and 3 stars. Like, the plot by itself wasn't bad. I didn't mind the type of relationship, nor their actions towards each other, but damn man the open ending was HORRIBLE. WHY LEAVE IT THERE????? I swear to god if it doesn't actually continue or give us extras I'm gonna mald. The uke was quite unique in his body. I liked it, though made me a bit sad haha. *Read it cause the uke reminded me of Till*

THE THREE STARS WERE GENEROUS. The pace wasn't shit, but definitely very quick. I would have liked to see more from them. Genuinely, the story basically ended so much earlier than its official ending; the author for some fucking reason just decided to give us EVERYTHING again but from the seme's pov... Okay, some of his thoughts were important, but the majority REST were so fucking discernible IF YOU HAD JUST READ THE FUCKING STORY AS NORMAL, I DON'T NEED TO HAVE EVERYTHING SHOVED DOWN MY THROAT, I HAVE READING COMPREHENSION SKILLS. Honestly I wanted to see a lot more from their gaming. Reality is that everything mostly happened outside of the MMO game they met in, and it's just not what I was expecting or really wanted. Nonetheless, it wasn't bad, and their relationship was quite healthy- IF WE FORGET THAT FUCKASS RANDOM SA SCENE. WHAT THE FUCK??? Mannn it was so unnecessary it immediately deducted points from me. I get both of their mindsets, I do, but Jesus Christ man it was still wholly unnecessary. Kinda hit hard ngl.... got me in my feels at times. The issues it grasped at weren't annoying or cliche. I liked. The uke at first looked like a fairly normal man, and I was happy about it. He got sooooo cliche-ukeified by the end.... we saw twink birth and I'm SAD ABOUT IT. They were cute sometimes. Okay done. (I finished this so long ago but just couldn't bring myself to continue the side stories. My bad chat.)

It was so cute and I love gaming stuff, but man... this had so much potential, and it was all WASTED. There's so much more we could see, so much more that could have been expanded... it's sad. At least, we went from point A to point B without hurdles, so reading wasn't frustrating. But, yeah, it was kinda underwhelming and disappointing. Wanted more for sure.