Mich's manga / #want more!!!(450)

Eh not too bad. Would’ve wanted to know when he started to like him. Like if it had been ever since they were first told it’d be good if they were competitive with each other too as kids. If so, did he only sleep with other girls to relieve his pent up desires for uke? I thought uke was gonna ask him to let him to him in the end. Maybe if it had been longer. Art was nice

Meh. It wasn’t that bad but I wish it had been longer to see if he stayed with both or chose one. Art was hot thoe. Especially when the Pe teacher was rough. Dem faces were yum. Yesss ok it updated again in 2023 and I enjoyed ittt. Kekeke I was still left wanting more. But they were cute at the end when they took an actual trip and we got to see a tiny pov of how the uke viewed the two semes when they both talk to eachother. They look like a bickering couple (lw) and I wouldn’t mind if they ended up being a thruple (where all three like eachother not just both towards uke, althoughhh, I do like that troupe too… and usually more) but ahhh would’ve been nice if they got jealous of someone else giving uke attention(so we see the difference in how they treat their little rivalry compared to how they’d treat an outsider rival) like if someone tried to chat him up in the last ep on the way back from the bathroom and the semes saw. But that pov we got was nice too. Now we move it to 5 stars >;)

Ehh not too bad uke came to slowly love seme. They could’ve had more lovey dovey scenes if it wasn’t for the slight misunderstanding where seme was holding himself back because he promised uke he wouldn’t tell him he loved him. 2 yr age gap

Meh not too bad. Didn’t like it as much when I found out seme didn’t have a slight crush on him back in the day ik highschool. He just wanted to see his moe gap. Also the boss never got told shit by the seme. Seme just used the ring to ward him off. Like it’s cute he gave him a ring but ??? How you know he even gives a fuck that our uke has a relationship. He sure as hell don’t care that they’re boss and subordinate AND touches him so why would he care that he got himself a SO /: None of the ex’s showed up to stir up trouble either. I wanted to see the interactions

Ahhh goodddd I wish it was longer thoeee. 07/08/21 whew ok so we’ve now finished a good portion and apparently there’s an uncle side story too?? That old man sucks idk how they’ll redeem him since apparently he’s acted superior to omegas since young. I was really into the uncle story too (the one who was an “alpha” but was really omega. Gah damn his alpha was hot. He had that tired brooding look going for him

Meh ig it wasn’t too bad def felt short and a bit shallow. We could kinda tell maki was into him in th train scene when he got pissed but didn’t know forsure till later on. We didn’t really get explanations to maki’s past or Naru’s actually. They did end up together in the end thoe so that’s cool ig. He didn’t treat him too roughly before so that’s good (like he wasn’t that much of an asshole). Art was good too. I really liked the piercings.

Ahhhh this was goodddd. There were some things I didn’t like about the ML but I forgot what… a littl more possessiveness at the end wouldve been nice. What the heck was that ch where they came back to school and everyone. Literally EVERYONE whose come out came out and disturbed them. I didn’t mind the other delinquents since it kind of showed how much more protective the ML was now that she was his gf. Also wtf she should’ve yelled at the others for now trying to take advantage of her bf too (I say too cause they take advantage of her already). So also the 4 stars cause of those two things. Kinda wanted to see them grown up with children. The way ML told dude good luck instead of being possessive about him confessing to his GF LIKE SIR. like yea he can’t win her over when our ML was deadass pushing her away all this time. And now that he’s actually trying to keep her ofc she’s not gonna leave him but mannn at least show some hostility towards to the dude for even trying to. It was cute how before that he whispered in her ear saying. I love you.. maybe… like kekeke reminds me of the I like you scene ( he didn’t say it but basically didn’t when explained I’d liking meant blah blah blah (described the scenes between him and her))) shit was cuteee. I just would’ve liked for her to not be a pushover by the end but we see that slowly happening so that’s fine

Okkk this. The art was good but there were just some details that were missing man. I would’ve loved to give it 4 stars but did the uke srsly have to keep repeating how he was scared of the seme till the very end. Like we see he lw warmed up to him but then he brings up how he still feels uncomfy and I’m just like ??? We needed more character development. At least for uke to say he’s scared for others when the seme is mad since the seme never did anything (after they got together) to harm him. And for him to suddenly accept to go out with him? Like I said more character development. And some plot holes like that secret fbi guy. Why’d he fall so hard for our uke? Uke painted it as a fling (lw) he brought up the relationship in passing like he was going to elaborate but never did… but I do love me some yakuza action or in this case mafia so yeah I give it 3.5 stars. Good art but needed (like I’ve said a bunch) character development and more to the plot

Missing character development and plot. We saw how they came to be but suddenly newfound uke fell for the seme even though he said he wouldn’t do sex friends because he wanted a serious relationship but suddenly it’s ok?? And we see from seme’s POV that he didn’t fall for uke at first sight so why go after him in the first place even after uke was saying nah I’m good I’m a top. Unless he wanted a challenge which I wouldn’t be surprised if he did. Like info was presented and then thrown away. What’s the point of bringing in a debt and loan sharks if they’re just going to disappear after the first two ch. like did uke pay the whole loan with his house or what. And the bro was presented but not shown as an obstacle so why make a big deal out of him?? So yea 3 stars. Art was good and story was alright. Could def use some improvement.

Not even gonna lie the first part of this really made me feel like seme was so damn shitty for not really caring that the uke was almost raped. If anything he got mad because he didn’t let himself get raped. Like I thought he was lw into him but kinda in denial but he would’ve gotten pissed if that was the case. I was glad when the uke basically said fuck you and quit. But once the seme came and asked for him back he gave in. Also there were times when I was like ??? Why the fuck do you keep going back to the seme you’re dumbbb. So yes they both got on my nerves but I mean at least he didn’t abort ya know… that other firemen(?) was hotttt I wish we had seen more interaction between him and uke. Plus he lw showed that he didn’t really trust omegas but the author didn’t get into it??? So why even bring it up in the 1st place. Waste of time and panels. Some info presented just didn’t have outcomes. Or at least we weren’t shown. Like Josh’s babies. Even those they were mentioned a few times. Josh’s sister (Emma) possibility crushing on uke but somehow being ok with uke and seme’s relationship when she finds out and being ok with him leaving in the 1st place. Yea idk. Could’ve been better. It was good but info was missing