Desire Detection
Pretty sure seme is actually a stalker but justified it by being a cop lol. Cuteee
Colorize
Nope... Art was pretty but illustrator should learn how to draw petite figure too and not just buff bodies... Really? High school kids with bodies that looks like has been lifting weights for years? Even girls are 'musclely'. They should work on drawing expressions too not just pleasure expressions... I mean, why does he looks like he's boasting that he's a rich child when he's acting as a man working at fried chicken restaurant confessing his love.... Translation could be improve too, it didn't read out smoothly at all... It felt like the characters were a bit plain with the dialogues... And plot wise, the stalker issue was quite serious with how the stalker even entered the uke's house twice and even managed to harm the uke, but it only ended with a note to the door saying "sorry, I won't disturb you anymore" after uke's agency release an rebuttal article about the scandal... Literally just one panel for that note to end that stalker issue... I know it's a short story but still, make it make sense...
The Third Ending