blueberry's manga / #Angst(558)

Great plot and storytelling, it was very complicated tho so it needed to be binged in one sitting lmao The generation of romantic feelings between characters were occasionally superficial, but overall it worked out Storytelling was very clever given the complex storyline, but could’ve been a little more clear at times lmao. Did great tho. Preferably could’ve clarified when Lai recovered his recent memories after the drug-flower sniffing incident near the end of the story…I wasn’t sure how to interpret his perspective when I didn’t even know what memories he had on him at the time. (Answer was that he recovered all recent ones by the time they started searching for shit underground. He was only filling in his childhood memories at that point.) Near the end things got really cuddly and cute, but the tone shift was slightly too fast. It was 100% angst before that, so. It could’ve used a bit more time to shift colour palettes like that. Ending definitely needed one more chapter to wrap up some things and conclusively end the story. Hector’s mom should’ve had a cute reunion with her son, Ellen and Edwin deserved a little more cuddle and wholesome scenes after heir role in the story, and the dethroning of both fathers could’ve been more fleshed out. As it was, it was just briefly glossed over as “the court took care of them ok yep yep the end yep.” Some things that need clarity lol: Hector’s biological dad was the knight, right? That’s why Lai’s comment about Hector’s mom “not being alone” was significant, to show she had a partner? Unless it was a nice stepdad,by which more clues should’ve been dropped about that. As it is, the emperor probably didn’t reveal that he didn’t do incest and that Hector wasn’t his direct son, so he could slander Hector’s mom (“she’s an incestuous whore! I’m a man tho so I can fuck whoever. But she’s a slut!!!”) and jeopardize Hector’s position as the next in line to the throne.

5++++++***!!!!!! SO GOOD. SO HOT. SO HOT. SO HOT. SO CUTE. SO WHOLESIME. SO AAAAAAA I’M FKN JEALOUS AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

4.5* V interesting possessive seme :3

4.5* Pretty good gang plot, it might’ve been a tad bit cliche? But idk if it had that effect purely cuz of the art style Yeah it was pretty good tho

It’s so wholesome :’))))))

Love the badass setting and premise! Too bad the art is a tiiuuuny bit lacklustre in delivering these badass scenes, but it’s expressive enough and good :) Loving the characters too, the characterization are hella solid

MC starts off pretty pathetic and unlikeable but he turns really humane, cunning, and wholesome later on. I wanna say the development was OOC but he DID undergo 4+k suicides and lost his fear of pain and death…o can see not being afraid of death making ppl mega confident and relaxed enough to think logically 24/7. Pretty awesome! Really funny story too. The side characters play off each other really well, the author has a great selection of casts and skills Yeah ok the story just gets better and better and I’m left bawling my ass off cuz the MC is such a nice empathetic bastard and he makes sure ppl get great endings (he’s giving the best EOL care fr lol, for the dying patient, their spirit, and the families/friends left behind). Author is really creative with MC’s methods and the death counter is well-balanced Also forgot to mention THE ART IS AWESOME AND BEAUTIFUL MAN THE GIRLS ESP ARE SO PRETTYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY