maychan's manga / #smut(136)

the first story was okay, not much of a plot but at least it was nice. unlike the second couple that I really didn't care or like at all. their story is kind of dumb. the third one was like "a dumb guy go to a concert, he meets another guy that invite him to his tent and rapes him (if he was drunk and didn't know what he was doing) and I guess they will keep having sex for no reason after meeting once. so the third in story-wise was the worse out of all of them.

repetitive, have no plot, have no progress so it only porn for no one. only to those guys that want to masturbate. but even for this why would they want to masturbate to a "guy" that turns into a girl again? I think this story just doesn't know who he meant to turn on, guys or girls. it has no idea and this is why it a big stupid mass with no direction. it even worse than porn, at least porn know who their audience is, this crap is not.

shitty writing with a shitty uke that should burn in hell. I will finish it but it will stay on my shit list for being so unbalanced relationship and so unfair from the power of one partner has over the whole relationship. it a shame cause the idea was interesting but the characters were so one-dimensional, so narrow and so boring and never change just like the world in this story is too boring. you can call it old fashion shoujo only the girl is a man that acts like a dumb dog most of the time, and it will stay the same.

I really enjoy the plot ^^ fuck up for sure but really interesting for what it is. and it short. very nice! and the ending was perfect!

the main couple and story was good but there was a faw big problems with this story that make me feel it wasn't that good in the end. 1. the ending felt very incomplete. we seen little to nothing of the life of our main couple after they got together and it was such a shame. we mostly seen them felling in love, having a bad time and break up. what lead me to the next point: 2. too much screen time to the crazy ex and him becoming a "normal" person and forget his obsession out of no where. all of sudden he have a normal brain to reach the fact that he is a bad thing in the MC life. wow he could not reach it before he kick his ass with punches and rape him? we should forget about all the abuse, the control freak, the unhealthy behavior, his obsession, him having no problem to hurt him physically and mentally. only for the ex to one day say "oh maybe I did him bad. I don't know..." sorry that not how it works! it really isn't!! and it was so frustrating to read this kind of crap and bad massage. 3. I wanted the MC to get free by his own ability and action. not cause his ex let him go free. it make him seemed well...like someone that will never fight for his future. and I just didn't like it. other then that I like the art very much it was beautiful and charming, the topic of the tattoo and the main couple. a shame we didn't get that much time with the main couple cause the ex took the rest of the chapters. but I like the Seme, he was great and cool ^_^

the story is dumb, the uke is dumb and the Seme is a selfish rapist. great =_= mostly porn with little plot and stupid and rushed ending!

the very lest couple are the best, even their story is more balance and fun to read. Lim and hae il best couple!

I hated the uke in the first couple, he was annoying and pain in the ass. I like the Seme design a lot. I like more the second couple of his big bro and the other Seme that look almost the same has the first Seme. but they come a little too late and less time to develop. they felt too rushed and too fast, I wanted more of them.

why do I even bother reading this? =_= at least the art is good. drop ch 21

drop ch 2. I really don't get what's going on in this story, and I"m not going to bother XD