lenaGRonyx's manga / #tough event(65)

|Chapter 12| Ahhhhh it looks sad!!!

["Love Is An Illusion" ("If You Hate Me So (Yaoi)" - Dojin x Hyesung) - "Love is fantasy! ~The Queen~" - "Love is an Illusion! - Superstar"] |Chapter 116.6|

["Serene Bird" - "Mania"] |Chapter 56 - Dropped| C'est super mal écrit, j'en peux plus. The plot isn't really the problem, it's plainly poorly written and doesn't make any sense (events, characters, dialogue). Sometimes, it's rushed and other it's just "fuck the logic". Moreover written by someone who probably doesn't understand these addressed traumas, so makes it worse

|Chapter | Dooshik's hair color and length change like every 3 chapter (get on my nerves and also make me laugh) and he speaks too much while sexy time, but he fucks like me, made me laugh (got curious about the author) XD --Chap33 : the heck? First, the guy Dooshik forgot about urgence/hospital, his lover could be dying and he still took the time to fight with Pilwon. Then they wanna make out (why? going to hospital is still an issue), their injuries flew off (fuck you), and why? why Jooha is up to it and how Dooshik didn't saw bruises and stains of blood? Jooha just got raped and bled because of it, so how? why any of them would want it?-- --Chap36 : was hilarious--

Poorly written, so it's bad. Loved the miscarriage and all the psychological aspect of the plot (suicide, therapy for psychopath (xD)), it changes but rarely well handled (the worst was the family gathering after the miscariage, the author wanted it to not be too heavy and so use the gag "he cries easily" the whole fucking chapter, one not funny and two if you empathise at least a little with the couple who lost their baby, it was fucking horrible to read). And what the heck with this end, it's not finished.

|Chapter 113 - Dropped| --Their newborn is an alpha female in a world without second gender, THAT is interristing--

Ca m'a mise bien. Il y a rien qui va au début, c'est pas très claire ni logique, les perso prennent des décisions qu'on comprend pas, quand ils commencent à avoir des sentiments l'un pour l'autre ça sonne faux (et les scènes de sexe sont pas assez hot ou sexy ou bien faites pour compenser, juste middle/middle low). Ensuite lorsque ça devient très psychologique et mature dû à l'événement de la fausse-couche et le contexte dans lequel elle a eu lieu, là ça devient génial. Les chapitres side story, je comprends pas comment ce sont des side stories d'ailleurs, mais dieu merci ils étaient là. C'était trop bien.

["Midarana Omega wa Koi wo Shinai" - "Aware na Beta wa Koi wo Shiranai"] |Vol.1 Ch.5|

|Chapter 52 - Dropped|