kuroosbedhead's manga / #Doki Doki(55)

3.5 The manga was so wholesome!! I have to say though that i did not like the bonus chapter/aka their first time! That’s not how you write smex scenes, honestly I expected something better from such a manga to then be disappointed by the seme being very pushy. I also did not like the subplot of the family. Like why do they even want them to get together again? There’s a reason they aren’t together and considering how the son has to take care of the whole household alone and stuff like that are reasons why they divorced. To say they divorced because of usual couple arguments is completely missing the point. The parents shouldn’t get together again. Not with the dad like he is. It’s completely valid that she left but her son should have gone with the sister and his mom. The other thing is like why are they trying to push it. It’s the parents decision and relationship. That shouldn’t be forced. Nice if they can keep the patch work part but forcing them together again, is just weird.

So for me it’s a 4/5. I really like the art style, luca is so freaking cute and handsome and the piercing!! I also love how they are just so horny for each other with both of them being really forward. healthy and talking about what they want and exploring things. however it was bit rushed esp. if you think about how major Makoto’s decision is at the end, I would have liked to see their relationship develop more slowly or with more details. But yeah the only thing to really criticize is how it wasn’t really addressed that makoto obviously was someone very susceptible to prejudice. Like the way he basically made everything Luca said or did into him being a representation of his culture or him having a nightmare about Luca eating his pet like hello? He may be a maasai but he won’t eat your pet etc. Like it’s okay to initially make makoto how he was because it was a reaction to encountering sm from a very different culture but then it should at least be addressed and changed gradually

Was okay, liked the comedian couple a lot more but both couples/stories had so much more potential that wasn’t met which is very disappointing. They were rushed, also there were a few instances with both semes in which they were a bit creepy, stalkerish, kind of dubcon. Like the first seme stalking the uke for like 10 years, documenting everything. And then the second one saying things like: you disliking it could be hot too.