verli's manga / #smut(549)

the def wish there was more relationship building sometimes they would be talking about how they care for each other and then JUMPSCARED IM SEEING THE BOTTOM GETTING POUNDED like bro come on…this story def needed more the main characters talking and less of them just getting it on and ngl it wasn’t that much smut was surprised me i just think the plot be lacking so that’s why the smut scenes were so jumpscary . I could honestly care less about a baby sure it would be cute so adorable but in terms of story they didn’t build the characters enough to convince me they would even be ready for a baby or even marriage. I get that it sure it’s omegaverse but the only kind of plot that made this “romantic” was them promising themselves to each other when they were like children and bro they are children i would get it if they grew up together for a longer period of time or even spent more time together but the bottom didn’t EVEN REMEMBER HIM NOT EVEN AS A FACELESS BOY HE REMEMBERS VAGUELY

i’m not even gonna go lie to you this was much better than i thought it would be

that was greenest flag i’ve seen in a while IN AN OMEGAVERSE TOO IS WILD

a top omega and bottom alpha SO INTRIGUING EHHEHEHEHE

ml was FULL green flags well at least towards Sowal AND OMG I WOULD KILL FOR THE SECURITY TO HAVE A SIDE STORY AHHHHHHH HES LIKE MY FAV CHARACTER TYPE HEEHHEHEHEHE

weird thing to say but i think it might be too much smut i think the writing was shit that’s why i’m saying that we kinda just JUMP IN to it so like it was def giving porn with plot but not a very good plot

ACTUALLLY REALLY CUTE wow been a while since i’ve seen such an oblivious green flag of an alpha love to see it

I NEED MORE AHHHH