lilithespark's manga / #BL(1786)

Mid actually. I rly want to like this, but the drama just feels so contrived… Where’s the spark?? Why do they avoid their problems through sex?? Sighs I thought there would be more acting elements in this, but it’s just your classic, cliché fake dating trope with okay execution. Bc of that I’m not feeling their dynamic ngl. Art is good tho 37

13 Give me moreeee! I like the soccer elements akdhsksjsm

That was…. SAUR good??! It’s gems like these that maintain my hope in BL. It’s criminal how this is so short! Despite the lack of significant relationship development, I loveddd the music elements. Really sweet premise, and I love their dynamic near the end! I wonder how much better this could have been with the characters more flushed out because I really loved THISS and the gorgeous art.

5 Liked their other world version of them more tbh. Wish that was explored more. Feels weird because they’re essentially adults masquerading as high schoolers, which makes me wonder why make them high schoolers in the first place? And depict that smut and all… Eh idk. But mid. Pacing is too fast and rushed for my taste. Good art

40 i love how they’re so mature and the communication is just *chef’s kiss.* i feel a little bit less smut and more plot would be excellent

45 interesting! it’s like a parody on toxic omegaverse. i like that the mc is so straightforward and cute. this is alpha x omega but it has a different twist, which i like. i like the psychological undertones, and the mystery is really intriguing. angst? yes. tragic? also yes.

Slow, boring, and mid. The pacing is so slow and for what? There’s no tension between the two leads at all, and the flow feels weird. One second they’re walking on eggshells around each other and the next a drunk encounter ? After all that, the best the author can do is make them both drunk? C’mon now. There’s virtually no payoff to this and there’s even a timeskip so no lovey dovey couple fluff…. Sighs. Waste of my time

24 Their chemistry is insaneee. The MC is a lil’ weird tho (aka sus). Anyway, love a muscly bottom any day!

5 It’s obvious who the MC will end up with lol. I do miss BL like this with a school life, unrequited love setting though. The art is so cute!

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