lilithespark's manga / #school life(890)

Slow, boring, and mid. The pacing is so slow and for what? There’s no tension between the two leads at all, and the flow feels weird. One second they’re walking on eggshells around each other and the next a drunk encounter ? After all that, the best the author can do is make them both drunk? C’mon now. There’s virtually no payoff to this and there’s even a timeskip so no lovey dovey couple fluff…. Sighs. Waste of my time

5 It’s obvious who the MC will end up with lol. I do miss BL like this with a school life, unrequited love setting though. The art is so cute!

This is SOOO cute! What this manga did well— it nailed! But the problems were… not so good. I liked the fluffy video baking content they make, and I WISH the mangaka explored that more! The conflict basically ruins the story, which really shouldn’t be the case if it is the bulk of it. Of course it’s a misunderstanding, and it gets fairly frustrating to read with the ML pushing the MC away for… no well-founded reason? I would get it if it’s due to his last trauma or whatnot, but I think the author just makes him do that for the sake of plot, which is my problem with this. CUTE but frustrating read. It’s quite saddening because this did have a lot of potential that just got wasted. Okay read.

5.5 They’re cute! But that’s really all there is to it. They get together with little misunderstandings, which is a pleasant change of pace. In a sea of BL where every BL is the same toxic bull, this does stand out in a way, with how the MC is straightforward with his feelings as well. Pretty art and yeah

61 REALLLY good! I was out off by this at first because of the art style, but just reading this you can tell how much reverence had for hip hop and street dancing! All of dance battle and competition scenes just feed my brain so well! Very thrilling moments. I love how the art is focused more on the form and silhouette of the characters when needed. Story wise, it’s nothing groundbreaking. The romance subplot is alright. I like how it isn’t the main focus, though there is still a fair bit of tension between the two leads. This is like a breath of fresh air because hip hop and other dancing styles are the star here, as opposed to ballet or contemporary dance.

35 This is pretty interesting! Liking the dark themes. Wish I knew what direction this will take

20 THEY ARE SO CUTE RAHHH

34 Def interesting! Probs the definition of a toxic relationship with a manipulative ML, but I like how the MC doesn’t take his crap and fights back because he’s his own person. The ML is certainly possessive and twisted in the head, but his behavior does have a reason behind it, although it’s not justified for it. His character is interesting, and so is the story! Loving the good art too. Wanna see what happens next!

36 They’re so funny I love themmm. Also love how not all the characters are ikemen lol. I also LOVE how the MC is so straightforward like slay those misunderstandings!

15 Very fast paced, but their dynamic is rly cute! they’re both equally clingy and needy to each other