peaches's manga / #poor uke(133)

09/19/22 ch 5.5 plot: 4 story: 4 art: 5 writing: 3 uke: 5 seme: 5 chemistry: 5 skinship: 4 overall: shut up everyon shut thefUCK UP this was nice i honestly contemplated on giving it 4 stars rather than 5 but it gave me a whole story in just 5 chapters. 1st chapter was already really promising and despite having only 4 chapters left to complete a story it still managed to achieve it. there was drama associated with a heavy past of two young people, violence was involved, cute interactions (small and big from the main characters and even the extras), lovely romance, great art!!, nice writing... so many good qualities that checked so many boxes that it would be a waste not to give it 5 stars. i love uke n seme so much theyve been through hell yet they still managed to have a kind loving heart. couldnt be me cuz if it was me i wouldve lost my shit ages ago. anw i wanna see more of them i wanna see how much more their life will look like now that they are together and so on. just wanna repeat that i rly love the art 5/5

09/29/22 ch 15 4 stars there are some really cheesy moments that are bone chilling to me lol jk anw disappointed on how they've come together as a pair? literally just vibes like somehow they just suddenly like each other with no proper buildup whatsoever. uke i can understand if he felt attracted to seme bc seme naturally has the charisma of an actor. but seme showing interest to uke out of the blue and with such obvious PURE intentions btw? impossible. idk the sudden attraction just didnt feel right. art is ok and story is alright too. i wouldn't say story is very consistent but, u kno, shes there? not very excited on this book but hopefully it gets better pointers: camera staff uke and big actor seme edit 11/01/22: ch 20 the skinship is so high and i usually like that and let that affect my overall rating but since the chemistry buildup was basically nothing i also didnt feel anything. close to dropping this just cuz the characters arent well rounded and story is kinda meh 12/15/22 ch 28: aw :( poor thing :( also i looove the art here on uke. he looks so delicate here the emotions were so crisp looking 04/15/23 ch 45: LMFAOOOO this the funniest ch so far 11/12/23 ch 68 last side story: ive learned to love this book :) seme the greenest flag to ever exist and uke the nicest sweetest fluff ball. she was a 3 at first but ended as 4 :) good art nice love story!

11/29/22 ch 22 plot: 2.5 story: 2.5 art: 4 writing: 2-2.5 uke: 3.5 seme: 0 chemistry: 2 skinship: 3.5 overall: ok, thoughts, i have..a few. first about the plot it really went straight to the point. this can be a confusing route since nothing was explained much about the flow but the thing is it's on the simpler side; mc is having an unrequited love, opted to move far away to help cope n stuff etc. basically i can forgive that part of the plot being just BAM it's happening already without any typical intro whatsoever. secondly there are things that the math isnt mathing. seme, or the crown prince, doesnt feel official to me. he doesnt radiate this intimidating authority bc he always has his hair down. it's a personal preference obviously but i just wanna say that he doesnt give off that regal respectable aura. also the fact that hes got this huge like legit gym buff typa body and it's somehow unbelievable to me lmao mans dont do anything rn howd he get that?! hes got hobbies like apothecary n drinking alcohol lol seme be honest is it medical stuff from ur medicinal hobby like, uh , steroids (jk ...unless .....) also speaking of seme i dont like him very much. one thing about him being royalty is hes got this dickhead energy like a true born royalty. at least he got that part right. mf is as privileged as can be and it's part of the character he was made into so i kinda just have to work around it and try to see if there are other things abt him thats salvageable. so far i couldnt bother looking, hes really so unbearable for me atm but hopefully he can redeem himself or something. ANYWAY enough about him!!!! what i like about this is that 'chefs kiss shot to the heart stabbing kinda pain' writing. esp uke's pov like,,, the story n plot can be shaky at first but his thoughts really pulls u in and makes u feel even a tiny bit of what hes feeling rn. doesnt matter if i was in a good mood when i first started reading this, i legit felt the emotions in his words. the way the author worded his feelings sounds and feels so raw, it was poetic. and i know uke's pondering can be frustrating to some and even for me despite thinking i understand him in some level, but yall gotta understand he thinks so innocently because he IS innocent. hes got that pure cinnamon roll shit going for him. witnessing him trying to navigate these emotions is something i look forward to in reading this book. im rooting for him. also men around their time are so funny theyd rather go to war and potentially lose their lives instead of confronting their feelings lmfaoooo about his sister, i try to sympathize i really do, but she makes it hard sometimes ugh other than that so far everything seems swell 3/5 edit 12/08/22 ch 23: seme is a warrior? that explains his buff built. although did i skip a part where that was mentioned on the previous chapters lmao?? anw it's good that that answered my question abt his huge body ahah lowered his score from 0.5 to 0 tho. mf is brainless and selfish i would say. knew uke is hurt and the first thing he does is ask him to spar with him with a sword. then despite seeing uke's hesitancy he went ahead and attacked him seriously. then hurt uke with his *real* attacks (shocking) and suddenly hes concerned???? motherFu cker ? hes unbearable for me fr 12/18/22 ch 24: ngl this chapter made me laugh out loud for cringing so hard when seme kept persisting uke on answering the question WHILE he's being stimulated and he couldnt give a proper answer like be ffr like i wouldnt be able to think of shit while feeling it too lmfao mf really said lets do a pop quiz while doing the deed 12/27/22 ch 25: props to this book for successfully making me react on all the past three updates lol but fr tho the seme's pov on this chapter !!!!! jesus CHRIST i was right not to like him from the beginning he legitimately makes me wanna pull my hair out!! UKE RUN !!!!!! 02/18/23 ch 29: the "running gag" of misunderstanding is just pissing me off atp. it's making uke hella dumb? i was defending him at first abt his emotions n feelings but he really doesnt think much abt other things beyond that no? i was rly rooting for him but he has to use common sense on analyzing other things. feelings i can excuse if he cant understand it, but other than that i have little patience for. lowered all scores except seme's onwards (also how much lower can u go from 0 lol). just realized on this chapter how much lacking the overall story, plot, and characters are. 02/27/23 ch 30: god give me something to look forward to in their stupid relationship. writing is going in circles. literally the same pov over and over again just a different way of wording per chapter. jesus. i kinda expected something from this book. now im almost just skimming through uke's redundant inner dialogues. score on writing is an embarrassing 2-2.5 now. shes hanging by a thread ur honor

12/01/22 ch 16 this was marked as incomplete and i wish it wasnt.........like this better stop updating lmfao i sound so harsh but theres really nothing to look forward to. might drop if they dont give decent story updates in the future. art is really good tho!

12/02/22 ch 16 plot: 2 story: 2 art: 3.5 writing: 2-2.5 uke: 3.5 seme: fuckin zero chemistry: 0 skinship: 0 overall: poor uke.. the poor thing really deserves better... ok heres what i think he should do. quit his job. i know it's easier said than done but trust me booboo that company isnt for you. drop that job and work in a different place. you get constantly harassed by the director at ur company, his dad who knows abt it perpetuates it, and the reason the shitty seme found interest in that company is only bc of you. if u quit, the agreement shitty seme has with ur company gets thrown out the window, that fuckin father-son duo can eat shit and if u go disappear that seme mf can eat shit too. win win situation for u babes think about it. but in all seriousness i dont think i will like this story very much. idk if u can tell but i dont like the seme i literally wanna skin him alive but watch the author justify his actions and make the readers like him. not me tho WATCH ME talk smack about him until the end of this book

12/03/22 ch 17 plot: 1.5 story: 1 art: 3.5-4 writing: 1 uke: 2 seme: -300,000 (if it's who i think it is) chemistry: fucking PASS skinship: nOPE overall: full of plot holes and story is not looking good. granted it's just 17 chapters in but i feel like this book could've given me the gist at this point but nahhh just vibes fr for the plot n story. art is really good tho. few commenters were like "i dont like it, art is too scary" lmao then it served its purpose? sorry that u clicked on a horror book with literally the word "ghost" in the title but didnt find the supernatural part of the book attractive or cutesy aw boohoo :( lmfao anyway so far thats the only notable thing here, that the art is really good uke can be HELLA frustrating like one of the times that made me wanna pull my hair out was (/s:) when he was trying to look at his damn phone for the vid but somehow he couldnt manage to do it bc he "keeps getting interrupted" like honey, there are 24hrs in a day yet not even a second to peek? are u fuckin fr. also so many times he couldve prevented certain situations to happen (office scenarios) yet didnt have the balls or even the wit to get out of it. Jesus H Christ. anw other than that, i dont blame him on the parts that he was a victim (/s:) im talkin abt all the assault i will forever, and by forever i mean up until the end of this book, LOATHE that supernatural entity (who i pray to god isnt the seme but i highly doubt it) to DEATH

not good lol seme is a BIG NO NO uke is a victim plot n story are basically nothing . literally no good resolution to any conflict introduced. this book was running on pure vibes and nothing but vibes lmfao the only thing this got going for it is its art

this was... an experience.. to say the least. this book is dark it's about trauma, suic!de, and a twisted unrequited love. it's a shame this got discontinued bc it would be interesting to see how things would progress after the last chapter. i wouldve loved to see what would happen to the twin and if there would be any changes in his life in the future. im rooting for him. the art is great it managed to capture the emotions in each character and you know it's really good whenever there arent any dialogues yet it's still able to encapsulate the rawness of it. i still wanna have hopes the author might wake up one day and continue this i mean who knows . anw if u liked this story ur sick in the head<3 im just kidding but fr we should all see a therapist

12/19/22 ch 6.5 plot: 2.5 story: 3 art: 3.5-4 writing: 2-2.5 uke: 3.5-4 seme: 2.5-3 chemistry: 1.5-2 skinship: 1 overall: poor uke :/ but also that scene with seme's son was so fuckin unnecessary lmfao? the romance buildup was lacking tho the chemistry or should i say the supposed 'feelings' for uke seme was giving off was so not there? (/s:) when he confessed at the end it surely felt sudden to me i was like boy are you sure you have feelings for him? like fr? lol didnt feel like it key plot points: uke and seme are both jav actors and are paired up for a series and things just developed from there blah blah

gagged me a bit omg this is so wrong in so many levels but good art tho