saw raws.. This story is shit

9353g May 8, 2021 5:26 am

just scrolled through the raws & everything happened so quickly. this story is not well written At All, also the rapist guy who kidnapped black haired guy apparently gets a side story. Are you serious.... Dropped this shit..

Responses
    Mio May 8, 2021 6:41 am

    may i have the link to the raws pretty please?ヾ(☆▽☆)

    Happyairballons01 May 8, 2021 10:53 am

    Well, the story isn't that bad. Now i really dont why there was a need to make a side story honestly for the blonde dude... However the main story is okayy but not the best for sure... It needs abit of brushing here and there.. But overall its not trash.. Exception for the unnecessary side story.

    Ouranaurora May 8, 2021 12:29 pm

    The blond dude rapes him and gets a side story???

    Soti May 11, 2021 3:52 am

    How is he a rapist? Did he rape him? I thought he only just drugged him.

    Happyairballons01 May 11, 2021 7:42 am

    Both

    Soti May 11, 2021 9:45 am

    He actually raped him?! Why the hell does he get to have a side story? Goddammit! I’m so dropping this!

    Happyairballons01 May 11, 2021 5:48 pm

    No no no listen what you can do is continue the main story then when the side story comes drop it... Because it's sooo unless.. Main story is 50/50 but okay... So yeah

    Soti May 11, 2021 8:57 pm
    No no no listen what you can do is continue the main story then when the side story comes drop it... Because it's sooo unless.. Main story is 50/50 but okay... So yeah Happyairballons01

    The fact that he actually raped him, I can’t continue even with the main story. I will not be able to forget it.

    Happyairballons01 May 12, 2021 6:55 am

    Very well.. U have ur reasons

    Soti May 12, 2021 8:47 am
    Very well.. U have ur reasons Happyairballons01

    If he had gotten some sort of punishment for his actions, then I could stomach it, but I wonder why the author thinks it makes sense to give him a happy ending.

    Happyairballons01 May 12, 2021 11:54 am

    Infact he gets a hell of a beating..to the extent he needs someone to help him and stuff.. Yeah he does get a punishment

    Soti May 12, 2021 4:00 pm
    Infact he gets a hell of a beating..to the extent he needs someone to help him and stuff.. Yeah he does get a punishment Happyairballons01

    they should have crippled him, but it does give me some sort of solace.

    Happyairballons01 May 12, 2021 4:12 pm

    Yup sure does

    Ouranaurora May 12, 2021 5:20 pm
    Infact he gets a hell of a beating..to the extent he needs someone to help him and stuff.. Yeah he does get a punishment Happyairballons01

    Thats not enough, he should have gone to jail for the rest of his life

    Ouranaurora May 12, 2021 5:21 pm
    The fact that he actually raped him, I can’t continue even with the main story. I will not be able to forget it. Soti

    You mean he comes back and rape him??? Or are you referring To the past?

    Soti May 12, 2021 8:26 pm
    You mean he comes back and rape him??? Or are you referring To the past? Ouranaurora

    I’m referring to the past. They said he was raped in the past.

    Ouranaurora May 12, 2021 10:21 pm
    I’m referring to the past. They said he was raped in the past. Soti

    But he didnt rape him in the past. So does that mean he will come back and rape him?

    Soti May 12, 2021 10:34 pm
    But he didnt rape him in the past. So does that mean he will come back and rape him? Ouranaurora

    Oh?! He wasn’t raped?! I stopped reading it after a while cos I was scared of the angst. But I came back to check if it was safe to pick it back up cos I had already been told that he was only drugged and not raped; but then again, I saw a comment calling the blonde guy a rapist and when I asked, they said he was raped. I don't know if it was in the past or the present but I’m guessing it was in the past

    Happyairballons01 May 13, 2021 5:18 am

    When the uke was drugged the blonde would occasionally harass him growing up.. And in the present time he kidnaps him and rapes him.

    Soti May 13, 2021 6:43 am
    When the uke was drugged the blonde would occasionally harass him growing up.. And in the present time he kidnaps him and rapes him. Happyairballons01

    Oh my God! It's even worse! I thought it all happened inthe past. What the fuck?! How the hell did the author think his being raped is gonna advance the plot? And then to even give the rapist his own side story? Gosh! I hate it when authors do silly things like this. They ruined the story!