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ReverseHaremJutsu October 26, 2023 3:54 am

I haven’t finished ch 40 yet, but I feel like the expressions and the way the characters act are kind of off? like Jeong-min doesn’t have any facial expressions or…personality even? like every time something happens he just reacts and it feels like the story’s happening to him rather than him literally being a mc. Juwon has a little more of an actual personality, but his character is so ridiculous like how do these two characters have so many misunderstandings without an actual reason. ch 40 obviously they’ve reconciled but why are there just tears streaming down Juwon’s face while they have segs??? huhhhh?? like what is going on I can’t take this story or the characters seriously like it feels like i’m just supposed to look at how well the segs scenes and be like “rock on” but I wanted some… substance in the story? don’t get me wrong I love my 18+ scenes and buff bottoms, but when that’s all there is it just feels like author saw a ton of webtoon w thick bottoms and was like lemme hop on the train without creating actual character first. they not doing what a lot of new bl webtoon are doing w their plot and characters and it’s giving old webtoon stories with the most generic premise and segs scenes and even then there are multiple ones that actually do it in a fun way, just not this one

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    StreamChromatica October 26, 2023 4:29 am

    Girl it's just a cute, fun story about a misunderstood guy and a deadpan guy. Come on you can't be seriously saying this shit when one of them is actually meant to not show any personality?
    It's not plot-driven, and that's okay. It's not to your liking, and that's okay, but to call it without substance is baffling, and calling out the trope is weird af. This is one of the mamhwas that have a less cartoon approach on the plot without it being subjected to realism still.
    If you want "fun", go with Lucky Paradise lmao
    This manhwa ain't for you, but it is for a whole lot of other people.

    Tsunmimi October 26, 2023 9:38 pm

    But that’s the plot of the story, I’d say the story flew above your head. , and can’t we just enjoy a story without giving whatever criticism this is, must y’all have something to say. We have enough toxic stories to last us until the year of the zombies, let’s just chill and enjoy this.

    Huuri October 26, 2023 10:03 pm
    Girl it's just a cute, fun story about a misunderstood guy and a deadpan guy. Come on you can't be seriously saying this shit when one of them is actually meant to not show any personality?It's not plot-driven,... StreamChromatica

    IM SAYING BRO if you don't like something about this manhwa you can leave we don't need or want your opinion!!

    ReverseHaremJutsu October 27, 2023 2:30 am
    IM SAYING BRO if you don't like something about this manhwa you can leave we don't need or want your opinion!! Huuri

    ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭ just a review cuz this not for everyone and I just rlly don’t like the author’s story building style or character building, some stories I rlly like when the ratings weren’t good and some I lowkey hated even when the ratings were good, I just put everything into words of why I didn’t like it instead of commenting “hate it” like this not directed at u i’m just touching on a few reply’s and this the most recent cuz even if the majority of ppl like it which is fine there are others like me who didn’t, rock on tho (●'◡'●)ノ

    Huuri October 27, 2023 2:47 am
    ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭ just a review cuz this not for everyone and I just rlly don’t like the author’s story building style or character building, some stories I rlly like when the ratings weren’t good and som... ReverseHaremJutsu

    Like I said if you don't like something about the story we don't want to hear your opinion about it :3!!! The author has worked hard on this manhwa not so people could comment that they don't like something about it!! Ofcourse people are gonna have their likes and dislikes but nobody gives a crap whether you dislike something from the story or not!!!^_^ Like I mentioned if you don't like it stop reading it there was no point in commenting >□<

    ReverseHaremJutsu October 27, 2023 2:47 am
    Girl it's just a cute, fun story about a misunderstood guy and a deadpan guy. Come on you can't be seriously saying this shit when one of them is actually meant to not show any personality?It's not plot-driven,... StreamChromatica

    idk to me like in my opinion it feels without substance and I can’t change the way the story makes the characters feel in my opinion like it’s all good w me if ppl like the characters cuz their opinion is that the characters are dynamic and interesting, but for me that’s not the case, as for the trope, idk like if you using a trope and not creating anything new or interesting (cuz in my opinion it’s not interesting) then to me the story itself is without substance. I try to write down fully why I didn’t like a story and understand why I’m dropping it before I do, sorry I kno the characters are important to ppl and I also get annoyed when someone doesn’t like my favorite character (●'◡'●)ノヽ(●'◡'●)

    ReverseHaremJutsu October 27, 2023 2:59 am
    Like I said if you don't like something about the story we don't want to hear your opinion about it :3!!! The author has worked hard on this manhwa not so people could comment that they don't like something abo... Huuri

    I like writing reviews tho it’s fun and it’s for myself, not rlly other ppl, I rlly like trying to think why I didn’t enjoy something and even if someone worked hard on something, you can’t control getting 1 bad review if the majority of ppl liked the story, it’s no hate to the author but to this story specifically, there are songs from my favorite artists that I absolutely can’t stand but it’s never directed at the person. It’s great no one gives a crap about my opinion cuz that’s not why I wrote my comment, it’s not for everyone to like it and the same goes for this story

    Huuri October 27, 2023 3:17 am
    I like writing reviews tho it’s fun and it’s for myself, not rlly other ppl, I rlly like trying to think why I didn’t enjoy something and even if someone worked hard on something, you can’t control gett... ReverseHaremJutsu

    If it's for yourself then you wouldn't had commented on a public comment section,you knew damn well people are going to react some way or another your review doesn't make sense at all.Every manhwa is different along with the characters and this manhwa has a different troupe.Youd understand why red hair was crying during there "little scene" if you payed attention to what is happening and understood the main characters Also this manhwa obviously has some comedy and humor which you probably don't have?:3 and "they are not doing what new bl webtoon are doing"??Who cares??They don't have too its the authors story not yours :33!!

    ReverseHaremJutsu October 27, 2023 3:39 am
    If it's for yourself then you wouldn't had commented on a public comment section,you knew damn well people are going to react some way or another your review doesn't make sense at all.Every manhwa is different... Huuri

    bruh it’s literally just my opinion and you finding it good is yours, not everyone thinks the humor is as good as you do, but if you can’t take it, like I said, rock on i’ve already said my piece, if you still don’t get it idk man

    Huuri October 27, 2023 3:49 am
    bruh it’s literally just my opinion and you finding it good is yours, not everyone thinks the humor is as good as you do, but if you can’t take it, like I said, rock on i’ve already said my piece, if you ... ReverseHaremJutsu

    Well nobody cares about your opinion bro especially if your hating just delete your comment little bro you knew what you were doing when you posted it :333

    ReverseHaremJutsu October 27, 2023 3:53 am
    Well nobody cares about your opinion bro especially if your hating just delete your comment little bro you knew what you were doing when you posted it :333 Huuri

    yeaaa no thanks

    ReverseHaremJutsu October 27, 2023 3:58 am
    Well nobody cares about your opinion bro especially if your hating just delete your comment little bro you knew what you were doing when you posted it :333 Huuri

    preciate it tho, you just keep doing you

    Huuri October 27, 2023 4:27 am
    yeaaa no thanks ReverseHaremJutsu

    Just shows how pathetic you are honestly but go off :33!!!

    Yaoi_Freåk October 27, 2023 6:40 am

    Idk why so many people disagree with you because I for one 100% understand what you mean by that but I don’t think the author wrote this without planning character development and personality for jeong-min I think the author went for a more mysterious and nonchalant personality..too nonchalant…sometimes I wish he could show some facial expressions or emotions,anything besides him with an idle face would be good because when juwon was crying like a baby jeong-min was just standing there like an npc, it was so awkward and you can tell he obviously has a hard time expressing how he feels, so hopefully we can get some background on jeong-min and his actions because I need an explanation on why,how,and when

    Yaoi_Freåk October 27, 2023 7:00 am
    Like I said if you don't like something about the story we don't want to hear your opinion about it :3!!! The author has worked hard on this manhwa not so people could comment that they don't like something abo... Huuri

    First off your nobody to be telling somebody that they can’t comment how they feel on a manwha/manga, I understand that the author worked hard but when your a mangaka publishing your work for the public to see, your gonna be expecting criticism or haters,and like you said nobody gives a crap whether they dislike it, but obviously you do since you keep reply to everything this person says,this is a public website, anybody can post any opinion they want, and if nobody doesn’t like it, then they can just scroll past the comment or have a little debate, not insult them and tell them to delete their comment.

    Huuri October 27, 2023 8:39 am
    First off your nobody to be telling somebody that they can’t comment how they feel on a manwha/manga, I understand that the author worked hard but when your a mangaka publishing your work for the public to se... Yaoi_Freåk

    Cry :3

    Yaoi_Freåk October 27, 2023 9:10 am
    Cry :3 Huuri

    Yeah that’s all you can say is “cry” cus you know I’m right

    Huuri October 27, 2023 6:08 pm
    Yeah that’s all you can say is “cry” cus you know I’m right Yaoi_Freåk

    Nuh uh :333!!!

    sabo October 28, 2023 9:21 pm

    omg all of these people dog piling on you are so sensitive and afraid over criticism that isn't even that critical I was literally about to trash talk like crazy lol anyways I agree with you op

    Yaoi_Freåk October 28, 2023 11:49 pm
    omg all of these people dog piling on you are so sensitive and afraid over criticism that isn't even that critical I was literally about to trash talk like crazy lol anyways I agree with you op sabo

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