Exacly I think the same. I give it two stars, mayb it deserves 3 or even 4 with this turn
If Shinobu wasn't dense to the point of LITERALLY being a child in an "adult's" body (srsly even his body is that of a 15 year old), I would give this a 5. Cuz making him, I don't know, ACT LIKE AN ACTUAL ADULT would make this much more interesting.
I was kinda hopeful too, but I have really disappointing news for you after reading the next chapter....
aa fuck
I WANT THIS TO BE GOOD WHY IS EVERY OTHER PAGE DESTROYING IT
the punchlines are awful
Exacly Actually i think the ideal of the story is quite good, but not the way it was made
Y'all are reading the words right
If this actually took a serious turn I might even give this an average score