If Shinobu wasn't dense to the point of LITERALLY being a child in an "adult's" body (srsly even his body is that of a 15 year old), I would give this a 5. Cuz making him, I don't know, ACT LIKE AN ACTUAL ADULT would make this much more interesting.
If Shinobu wasn't dense to the point of LITERALLY being a child in an "adult's" body (srsly even his body is that of a 15 year old), I would give this a 5. Cuz making him, I don't know, ACT LIKE AN ACTUAL ADULT... itikky
Exacly Actually i think the ideal of the story is quite good, but not the way it was made
Y'all are reading the words right
If this actually took a serious turn I might even give this an average score