Is it just me or the story is going down

I love sharks October 26, 2024 7:18 am

Is it just me or the story is going down

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    Hooble October 27, 2024 9:16 pm

    Tbh I feel like it's been going down since the intro of her brothers and dad
    Not saying I don't like the characters but I feel like it really muddled up the story bc there are like 0 stakes

    SJ02 November 4, 2024 5:39 pm
    Tbh I feel like it's been going down since the intro of her brothers and dadNot saying I don't like the characters but I feel like it really muddled up the story bc there are like 0 stakes Hooble

    I think that made it the most interesting, also unique compared to those usual stories. Not to mention, she will actually leaves with them rather than the typical “forgive and forget all the neglect” trope

    Hooble November 5, 2024 12:48 am
    I think that made it the most interesting, also unique compared to those usual stories. Not to mention, she will actually leaves with them rather than the typical “forgive and forget all the neglect” trope SJ02

    Oh yeah I agree it's unique and I like the fact our MC won't stick around

    But there just doesn't seem to be any stakes for our MC now, making the story slow and plodding. Which not every story needs heavy stakes but this one kinda based itself in having them and now the shift makes it weird. Because on one hand it seems like we're supposed to care about what blonde girl is scheming, but on the other hand she hasn't done anything to crazy harm our MC (so there's no need for revenge) and if she does, our MC is plenty plenty protected.
    Like if our MC cared about staying with the emperor (which I'm glad she doesnt) then maybe blonde girls schemes would matter, but they don't really have an effect on our gal as is

    SJ02 November 5, 2024 3:45 am
    Oh yeah I agree it's unique and I like the fact our MC won't stick around But there just doesn't seem to be any stakes for our MC now, making the story slow and plodding. Which not every story needs heavy stake... Hooble

    Oh, I get that! I do also think plot is a bit… dragged? Like tbh I just want the emperor to meet her biological father and for the battle of custody to begin