Oof

BrightSide February 24, 2019 7:39 pm

This story is getting so Mary-sue... this girl can do no wrong can she, just swoops in saves everybody and everybody ends up loving her blah blah. I think it's time for my hateful ass to drop this. I no longer enjoy it like I used to :(

Responses
    LushiferianII February 25, 2019 8:02 am

    Yes, because she is like.. you know... a good person.
    Something that you probably don't even know.

    Darkhope March 21, 2019 11:10 am
    Yes, because she is like.. you know... a good person. Something that you probably don't even know. LushiferianII

    If you think about it, she kinda is a Mary-sue. Even a good person can mess things up, we aren't perfect. But, she knows exactly what to say and what to do. In the last chapter, it's unrealistic that she is the only one who trusts this hyena guy. The author could make her believe in this boy but have doubts. We all are doubting a person's action, and the hyena's were so misleading.