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If you think about it, she kinda is a Mary-sue. Even a good person can mess things up, we aren't perfect. But, she knows exactly what to say and what to do. In the last chapter, it's unrealistic that she is the only one who trusts this hyena guy. The author could make her believe in this boy but have doubts. We all are doubting a person's action, and the hyena's were so misleading.
This story is getting so Mary-sue... this girl can do no wrong can she, just swoops in saves everybody and everybody ends up loving her blah blah. I think it's time for my hateful ass to drop this. I no longer enjoy it like I used to :(