Sorry, long rant.i'll still read this HAHAHA

BetterLeftUnknown August 30, 2020 3:23 pm

it was nice at first few chapters but after chapter 19

I'm as confused as Sabine... right from the very fucking start HAHAHAHA

it's like the readers are the literal FL. you get thrown into another world and there are no clear explanation of anything.

also if there is an "explanation" there's not much to go by. i don't know what the fuck the world is. what the hell is this queen candidacy shit is about.

well i guess that makes it more realistic if i am thrown into another world. but still! i'd try to learn more about it after those "classes" a;skdf;alshfkjh

okay i'll give it the benefit of the doubt and say that "it's because the story just started" *deep breath* okay

but still everything is so... CONFUSING hahaha

in the beginning at the house, they said she got comatosed for 4 years.
"surely you still know this common thing... right?"

cant they just think that her mind got fuzzy and explain shit to her on anything? (thank you frane, and the maid in her house) hahaha maybe it's just me wanting details more about what's going on.

is it just me reading it way too fast? or is the pacing fast or something

cause it's funny that there's a scene that keeps making her teleport in so many different places without a breather of sorts and i'm like wtf just happened? HAHAHA

the scene about the francian knights about to attack her and the emperor just comes by to her rescue... defeats the whole purpose of the social affairs lesson where the instructor told them they can't rely too much on the emperor and that they have to find the patterns scattered around the palace so they have to think of a way to do the shit themselves.

and is it just me but the love story was just placed there like it doesn't flow all too well for me but it's just... there hahaha

there's so much to rant but it's already so fucking long i'm sorry. whoever read this until the end imma just applaud you. i'm just stressed with life and i might have vent it out in this manhwa HAHAHA

Responses
    BYEFALISHA September 1, 2020 2:03 pm

    Props to u for writing that much

    BetterLeftUnknown September 1, 2020 2:40 pm
    Props to u for writing that much BYEFALISHA

    hahaha sorry you had to go through and read my shit HAHAHA
    i feel like i was stressed at that time when i typed this HAHAHA

    BYEFALISHA September 1, 2020 2:47 pm
    hahaha sorry you had to go through and read my shit HAHAHAi feel like i was stressed at that time when i typed this HAHAHA BetterLeftUnknown

    Nah it's fine I liked reading ur shit (=・ω・=)

    natsuhi September 18, 2020 3:43 pm

    Nope not just u. I feel it. Also it was so confusing how his own knight didn't know it was him. Like, what? Or is that not the actual king's appearance n it's his alter ego? And it is fast. Like they just explain everything in one go without like "showing" or letting us "experience" what's going on.
    And the FL character confuses me the most. Is she timid or is she not? Is she smart or not? Cunning or not? Want to be nice or not? Has resolve, doesn't have resolve? Like what? I need some sorta of consistency with her. Feel like the author wants her to be a typical nice damsel in distress but "oh no" she's actually OP but it's not flowing well for me at least

    natsuhi September 18, 2020 3:48 pm

    Also that how knight scene was so forced and cliche. They bring a completely new character that she doesn't even know, makes suggestions to her so that she goes to the knight n the knight just "happens" to talking dirty n now want to do the dirty deed with her?!?! Like what? Don't we all know the bride candidacy is going on with only witches? So y'all touching the King's woman essentially right? Like who wouldn't know that? Is that not palace etiquettes?
    Definitely feels like a force scene needed to show the all so powerful king but I think it could have been done in a different way.
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    BYEFALISHA September 18, 2020 5:04 pm
    Also that how knight scene was so forced and cliche. They bring a completely new character that she doesn't even know, makes suggestions to her so that she goes to the knight n the knight just "happens" to talk... natsuhi

    sAamE

    BetterLeftUnknown September 18, 2020 6:13 pm
    Also that how knight scene was so forced and cliche. They bring a completely new character that she doesn't even know, makes suggestions to her so that she goes to the knight n the knight just "happens" to talk... natsuhi

    omg so truuuuu HAAHAH