
When they're in the maze, at the end of the ch, he is the one warning her not to talk and stopping her from making noise, and in the beginning of the next one, she is the one to do that, with a literal kabedon lol, and then the maze turns into a fucking forest??? Must've been crunch time and they were all like, who cares who cares just finishhhh

Tbo I wish she felt rage and hatred for him, instead of defaulting to ah this must be some sort of a mistake and misunderstanding, then feeling pity and being sympathetic to him, like, he is slaughtering people no matter what the reason, and he will keep slaughtering people. It doesn't really matter that he offers a kind word to one of the survivors of his massacres when he is the one literally planning all of it. There's something to be said about continuing with your wrong decisions even knowing they're wrong and just creating suffering, just because YOU have something you want more than to NOT KILL all these people.
Also the way they are always so careless in the middle of a dangerous situation, I mean fr even if you have some power, you're not used to combat? Like make a rational choice in that situation and keep yourself safe first? Do you even understand the fact that they are your security detail and that if something happens to you that's it for them? Just open the window instead of going insane and putting your body out of the carriage and letting it hang there in a perfect position to extremely easily be harmed by smn for fucks sake, esp when you don't know how to keep your guard up and take notice of your surroundings because, again, you are not a combatant and have never in your life done anything even close to training yourself for fights.

Why would you change the genres even if you did reupload this? It's pretty clearly a seinen and not a josei or shoujo, the fanservce is really thick and the catering to the male character and readers both are glaring, so it gets a person disappointed if they come looking for josei. While it's pretty interesting it's super annoying how much they push the whole seductive and air headed one-san angle.
Leaving things at 4 endings I mean. Also, like if you do that, might as well give us the poly version as well.
I was actually rooting for either staying sexless or some version of a physically intersex body.