This was awful and it's absolutely not completed
That rapist king needs his head and dick separated from his body
Every time I get frustrated after reading something, I come back here like a reflex.
It's the 17th reread, I guess I'm not so lucky lately
Let's go for a 18th, huh
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It wasn't that good.
It's an Isekai so of course the plot was gonna be a sieve, and at that it didn't fail.
It had good points though.
The art -especially the food- was good even though the proportions were often off, or was it the perspective? I probably shouldn't point this out but the dramatic panels with the protagonists being twice the size of trucks were... Funny?
The characters were endearing but all in all, their personality were bland and beside Mujin, didn't have any development.
The kids were adorable and I sincerely laughed a few times.
But tbh, that's all.
It certainly can be enough for a lot of people but my suspension of disbelief got dropkicked right in the balls here,
And I think it's because of the author's tentative for explanations.
When you write something as fanciful as an Isekai, there are two ways:
Either you start the explanation that fits the laws of the universe you created,
Or you don't explain anything and focus on the story you want to tell.
Here the author tried to do both but came up with the explanation way too late in the story, and it seriously came out of nowhere, the villain popped out just because she was needed and never had any other roles than to explain the unexplainable with some vague magic power that had no substance or other purpose than to make shit happen.
The word "transmigration" was even thrown there like it was all planned and well thought of but sooooooo far in the story that it wasn't even needed.
So this kind of ruined the immersion for me.
I was okay with following the Isekai love story with its own intrigues and incidents, the protagonist even managed to become part of the universe with his own emotions and storyline, leaving aside his original intention of not tampering with the initial plot very naturally but suddenly BAM!
Here comes the rushed, incoherent and unnecessary explanation of the whole shit that nobody asked for, 10 bullshit chapters for free.
Also they were running in circles for a while, it kinda frustrated me, and their reunion felt really unnatural and rushed af.
He s dead, boy. You were at his funeral.
Doubt it at least for a while, don't just date a zombie because you're so in love ffs
What it needed was a longer arc where the MC drops subtle hints about his identity and everyone figures it out for themselves. But even then without any precedent to justify believing the supernatural it still would have felt undeveloped.
What should have happend was at least once or twice around the time he was rejecting the ML, he should have tried to explain that his time is limited. It would have triggered the mls abandonment issues leading to him having pointing out or imply that his sudden extreme change in personality was supernatural. The ML could have assumed he just had Multi personality disorder. That way when the MC finally came back the ML figuring it out would have made sense.
Sudden change in personality,
Implied his body is not his own
Knew major before they happen
Died but doppelganger appears
Doppelganger knows too much.
Specific way of cooking
And to end he could have cryptically said "its okay if you dont recognize me" leading to the ML eventually stewing over the meani ng forcing him to accept the supernatural explanation because there is no other answer and the mc already implied it several times.....but thats not what we got....(づ￣ ³￣)づ
Well yes, there were actually several ways to make the whole thing more coherent. But in the end I still felt literally kicked out of the story with the "explanation".
I was pretty immersed in the protagonists' cat vs mouse game, but when the magical duo popped I just lost focus and ended up with a shit ton of questions about them instead of the main characters
Like who are they,
what's this power,
how did they discover it
and master it enough to be able to send a specific person at a specific time of a specific book,
how would they know they are the only two in the whole world who possess it,
what the heck is their relationship and
why on earth would this girl hate her magical gay brother so much that she'd fuck him up like that,
how did the guy found out his crush was sent in a book and which one,
how does this world actually function since the mc just incarnated the "lousy side top"
-top, huh?! （￣へ￣）-
Meanwhile magical gay bro somehow created a whole brand new character for himself,
What happened to the magical siblings after the mc went back in the book,
How much time passes in their world vs the book's world since it looks like he just took a nap irl when he lived for months one the book,
Etc etc
... I've got LOTS of questions lol.
That's why I was very dissatisfied with this read ^^
I agree. But part ofnthe problem with that was how rushed everything got the moment he went back home. You can tell the author wanted to quickly wrap things up the moment the MC died.
Yes the ending just finished to entirely piss me off and made me rant in the comment section xD it was just absurd. Better stay dead if you're going to get that kind of fake ass grotesque réunion, for real x')
I didnt read any of your comment but since you wrote so much could you tell me is this like a really frustrating triangle where the dark haired guy is indecisive about the two who like him. Or is it obvious who he wants to be with? And one last question when does he choose? I'm not the biggest fan of triangles if they are frustrating.
It's not a frustrating love triangle in the sense that yes, it's very obvious who he wants to be with and you could say he chooses since the very beginning since he was never interested in the other guy.
Also, the object of affection in this love triangle is the red head, contrariwise of what the plot of the book planned in the story
Ah OK thanks for telling me, I started it and was not expecting the red head to be the object of affection but I'll look forward to seeing it happen.
So ... Question time
...just to confirm my theory...
The red head mc is actually the bottom and the meant to be bottom of the storyline in the story is your usual nippleless top?
I was wondering the same thing. Because the red head seems more of a bottom than the actual bottom. Mujin is unquestionable, top all the way.
Yes, also in lots of bl manhwa, tops don't have nipples. I don't know what but nipples seem to be a bottom's thing xD
But indeed Mujin couldn't be a bottom even if he got isekai-ed for 12 generations lol
And pretty badly at that
Can the fortune tellers spoil me a bit please:
What is this about, why is it so disliked and will I become rich in the next 5 years?
idk, idk, prolly not
Nooooo !!! At least, try sugarcoating it a bit! ><
Welp I guess my name's not meant to be the winner of Euromillion, maybe I'll invest this money somewhere else....
Born as a beta man, Jun-Kyung thought he would die and live a normal life until he suddenly manifested as an Omega. After living a life that changed all over the place in a day, he gave up ju-do, which was like life, and became the exclusive bodyguard for a wealthy family. Still he thought he was going to die living a quiet life until he had an accident with his employer’s son. No, it wasn’t until he found out he was pregnant. “Is there anyone other than us who knows this?” Even before accepting the fact that he was pregnant, the other person calmly proposed to him as if he was offering a glass of water. “Jun-kyung Ho, let’s get married.” The problem was the person who proposed marriage was the older brother, not the child’s biological father. Jun-kyung’s life which was just normal become intertwined with him and turns into a drama overnight.
Ugh thank you, I think I'm the kind who'd rate this low af
Thanks to you, I'll spare myself the pain xD
But I had to drop it at chapter 2.
It quickly became obvious that it was just some random ass porn but the art seemed nice until they stripped
Dude literally wears his back muscles above his skin wtf looks so weird, like some experimental anthropomorphic alien porn
Fuck, I liked this, it was funny, interesting, well written, original and then this happen???
We had our happy ending, he found and understood love, he made the most of the time he had left, he was stubborn as fck but strong despite the humongous shit he was going through I loved how he developed his game in parallel of what he was enduring and how the feelings were so much deeper than they were introduced at the beginning.
... And then nothing.
"Hahaha just kidding it was all a joke, nothing was ever at stake in this story you wasted your emotions here bitch."
Pwaaaah it's ruined for me that ending was the worst. I believed in this story and gave up my night reading this shit that got ruined in the 10last panels of the last chapter.
I waiting for someone to explain this cause I was confused asf because he was about to go got he underworld and then dude just gets go live and they call it a joke
The story is ridiculous and hilarious, but the translation seems off.
Yet I have a totally unrelated question and maybe people passing by will be able to answer it:
How the fuck
Do these yaoi dudes
Take off their pants
With their shoes on?
Told ya it was unrelated but I need to know.
Its yaoi universe, real life logic doesn't apply. Same way, they have sex in a bathroom with no lube and no preparation.
Yeah but, you know, some weirdos do it this way, even in real life hygiene and safety are not always such an obvious thing.
But taking off your pants with your shoes on, even in fiction I can't accept this sorcery xD
i totally forgot about that, why did I write that when I was half asleep
you're absolutely right
also totally understandable concern lmaoo
Of course it is! This is a skill that I'd love to learn x')
This was weirdly fun
... Or funnily weird?
But it feels incomplete, I need some explanation about wigglemichi, my suspension of disbelief feels betrayed here
I was waiting to see what mystery he was hiding in that old house, like a dead body or some kind of stollen precious goods, maybe a dark history for that man who was sticking out like a sore thumb in his hide out in middle of nowhere but... Mh.
Should have checked the number of chapters before making up a real story all by myself, I'm entirely responsible for my disappointment here.
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haha me too! I thought there was gonna be like guns or a dead woman? dunno
You too should have checked the number of chapters x') at some point I was even expecting a supernatural plot twist lol