This plot. .
It's written very clumsily
But the last sentence lol "Song Zhao why do you turn so fucking crazy at night"
Really? I think it's one of the BEST written. Weird.
I think it's a little haphazard since the tone of it went from serious to now just comedy. With the mafia theme the author is trying to fit in both so it's a little messy.
I think the presentation is definitely pretty messy basically. I was very confused with all these characters coming up because they were introduced in a weird manner. And then you suddenly find out that they're part of the mafia aspect. The first few chapters or so were good and followed a sense of flow in storyline but then the recent ones suddenly jump around too much to follow what's happening
Wow...."best" written. It's not even well-written, what makes you think it can be "one of the best" written? You must have not read many mangas before...or you just don't have any sense.
I feel so dumb because starting into the chapters I was like, did this other mc guy always look like this? He looks like a completely different character. But then later on it was just that his hair was neater. But I usually don't have such unfamiliarity with a character like that.
Mm.. I wish I could get into this more but the dialogue is composed of every single cliche yaoi line ever
This suddenly took a different direction than what I felt from the comments before this multi-chapter update?
I feel like every series I read next of this mangaka the story gets just a little bit darker lol
I really liked Sukai's design and initial personality before with the mc but now I really want to ship it lol
Tf lol
But fuck it, the squirrel sold it to me on the panel it showed up in
This will be the second omega as a seme I've seen if it does take that route! But I do appreciate that both look like they could be either role (๑•ㅂ•)و✧
Really! There's another couple with an omaga-seme?! Wow! What's it called?
The comment above! ^
Haha thanks.(๑•ㅂ•)و✧
I finished chapter 5 and was like... yay? Happy ending? And then the epilogue hit me (╯°Д °)╯
Completely lost my shit at the "I wanna be trash for him" omg. I'm so excited for this