Why can't I give less than one star :(((((
This is sick
SICK
S I C K
sick BUT MAKE IT CAPSLOCK
omg I think I had a brain rot from the beginning to the end.
Rape, victim blaming, rape, victim blaming, rape, victim blaming, rape, victim blaming
Here's your plot
And give them an happy ending just to make everything sweeter <3
I actually can't understand how someone could write something like this it made me feel so bad for the omega from the start poor guy just go away and escape from that disgusting alpha
I'm ready to receive a lot of dislikes but I didn't like this story at all lol
First of all this is a story about a lonely boy, abandoned (yeah a b a n d o n e d, i don't care how the story presents the father like a good man, he always left behind his own son) by his own father, which thought that travelling the world and teaching was WAY more important than loving and caring and being there for his own son, who was living with his grandmother and, when she passed away, started living alone.
The father couldn't even be bothered to call his own son because, you know, "the reception is bad", and wouldn't even write letters to him (we discover in the last pages that the letters that the son received were written by the father's assistant aka seme).
But because the father was trying to "fulfill the dream of his deceased wife" then it looks like that everything is forgiven and forgotten.
bro fr the dad be leaving his child like its not his but overall this is cute. The only problem i have is the dad AHAHA
I must say that I truly liked the story's prompt, that was very original for a omegaverse (rarely authors develop the children topic, only recently it became a plot point), but then I didn't really enjoy where the plot was going....
That said at the end of the main story I gave it 3☆ thinking that ultimately it wasn't that bad!
Well, with every extra chapter I read I rethink my rating and grow more and more disappointed, the third couple is becoming truly sad and toxic (although I SWEAR I really liked them at the beginning of their arc!!)
Well in the end after chapter 96 3☆ became 2☆
If you'd like let me know about your opinion!
Dammit, i clicked like on accident
This story actually deserved 5stars but the ending was so rushed it made me so angry!
I truly loved the relationship between Donga and the protagonist, they were so sweet and always supported each other like family and???
You just cut it in an anticlimactic way in the last three/four chapters :/
That was so depressing I swear
Please author give them back their friendship :(((
I'll start with saying that I really liked this story, both art, characters and plot.
But, now that I read it all, I am left with some questions....
1) Why was there a need to put in the "other world" the friend who... ikd? Tried to rape MC?
I mean, he is just there, he speaks one sentence and then he never appears anymore. He wasn't needed, it was just perfect when he was part of the nightmare :/
2) the subplot about the emperor who had to sacrifice himself to create the yellow dragon wasn't elaborated enough, and soon it was set aside and forgotten. Why?
3) Then I didn't understand the bad guys' boss, that... ikd?? Enchantress? Who wanted to become a God.... who?
4) Last thing, I think there are a looooot of interesting characters but only a few of them where developed, that's a pity!!
The ending was bittersweet, but I liked it, although I would have personally preferred to have
SPOILERR
both of them living happily in modern Korea lol
For number 3) Red Lotus/ enchantress was the serpent that was originally supposed to eat Yooshin (sacrificial prince) and become a god but when our now yellow dragon was originally the venomous snake, he wanted to be a god too and went to the god of creation to asks but she said she couldn't make him into one. Instead the god of creation gave the venomous snake a hint on what day the urn with Yooshin in it was going to turn gold, this is info the serpent/Red Lotus didn't know. As the serpent waited for the earn to turn gold she got tiered and asked the venomous snake to wake her up when it happens, although, on the 7th stormy day when the urn turned gold, the venomous snake didn't wake up the serpent and devoured Yooshin making him god/yellow dragon. The Red Lotus is obviously furious at this and became a bad guy towards yellow dragon. I hope this makes sense.
and for number 4) I also agree, I was so sad at the fact we couldn't even meet the other half of the spirit animals and wish that there were more chapters to introduce everyone and get to know them making their deaths a lot more depressing and meaningful and for the author to elaborate more on certain events and cover up major plot holes throughout the story. Still made me cry like a little bitch but yeah good story over all.
Omggg thank you about point 3) I totally didn't understand that part!! I totally thought that the the two snakes ' story was about yellow dragon and black tortoise instead of red lotus (because at a certain point someone says something like... black tortoise too was born in a wicked way)!! I also inverted the roles, thinking it was yellow dragon the one who originally had to drink the alcohol and black tortoise the one who drank it in his stead, so that part wasn't very clear to me, by this point I just would have loved to have more chapters about that part of the past... at least to better understand the actions behind the two snakes and the two princes actions (the one who survived isn't even mentioned in the story and the one who was eaten is barely introduced....)
Also totally agree about point 4)
Thank uuu your explanation helped me
No problem !! I can see how some people might not get the whole plot cause the story line is a bit messy overall and we don't actually get a lot of information on some topics but I'm glad I can be of service !! ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~
I'll be brief, lil bro always loved his (not blood related) big bro so, to get his attentions, he always made pranks like painting his face (basically unnerving and rude since page 1) because he found it "funny".
Spoiler: of course it wasn't funny at all, the big bro tried to bear with him because he felt obligations toward the family who adopted him.
Back to the (disgusting) plot, crazy lil bro noticed that big bro was shocked when he kissed him, so... why not doing whatever he wants and keep kissing and kissing and kissing him although he doesn't like it? Can't see any problem with it.
*insert some scene of manipulation and rape*
Big bro is a *ucking idiot and of course falls in love with this psychopath instead of fleeing in another country.
Happy ending
Honestly speaking I felt disgusted since chapter one.
In other words: sickening & revolting
(Ps I like killing stalking so I'm not only into cute and fluffy things ;) )
I'm sorry what did I just read.
Is this some sort of "Sherlock" reference or...?
Still didn't understand the plot
Okay I'm not even sorry to say this but you have to be quite idiot/stupid/idk to think about this story and then make it right into a manga without realising that EVERYTHING SUCKS. I mean???? The plot is sick???? But not sick like idk... killing stalking, nope nope nope, because while reading this ""story"" you can actually understand that the author legitimately thought this was okay and there was nothing wrong with it.
Let's talk about the plot: a father, instead of taking care of his son, decides to take into his house four students from all over the country, moreover he won't take care of them! He just forces his son to LITERALLY BECOME THEIR HOUSEMAID WITHOUT EVEN CONSULTING HIM FIRST.
Also??? The four boys literally treat the boy/MC like a servant, how can someone think this is okay???? LET'S NOT FORGET that the MC can't even think about himself/ his future because he has to take care of the other four selfish idiots.
I won't even talk about the love story because I legitimately didn't understand the (disgusting) plot and the characters """"development""""".
Worst part ever: when the seme gets to make the uke feel guilty about ignoring him and, for once, thinking about his own life, and the uke actually saying he's sorry about it.
I'll be honest, if you liked this story I think you should consider rethinking a lot of things about your life...
You just gave me a summary to why I should not read this Thank you from the bottom of my heart, really don't like the bad after-taste from reading a manga
Couldn't have said it better. Wish I had read the comment section before reading this crap. While reading it, I kept hoping for some positive dev. When that didn't happen, i sincerely prayrd that I wasn't the only one that thinks this story is trash. So glad people in the comment section all feel the same. Story is just plain nauseating. Especially the seme. He's an absolute jerk and the uke comes off as some kind of wish washy character with masochistic tendencies
The First part of the manga was very confusing
Character development was actually really weird
Also if you didn't notice basically the omega raped the alpha and forced him to bite his neck and then basically used this against him without feeling guilty
Sooooo
That's fucking sick
The omega is a manipulating bitch from the beginning to the end and the second story had some sort of intrisic victim blaming ( I'm taking about the omega, I think the alpha was actually trying his best so I liked him)
1☆ pretty disappointing