In 1960s America, the blunt macho Dennis takes on a shepherding job alone for three months in the su...
- Author: Silence
- Genres: Yaoi / Drama / Webtoons
To keep it short, I think the premise and plot are interesting and the symbolism of the characters and their relationship are worth exploring. However, I think the author’s execution is mediocre at best. I do think the story the author was trying to tell needed more time. Such as, more moments where Todd appears to be more regretful about what he plans to do in the end. Having Dennis be more hostile towards Todd when they first meet would’ve be nice and the phrase “Don’t trust anything except the sheep” should’ve rang more in Dennis mind as a added layer of internal conflict for Dennis (and in turn adds doubt to their relationship). All of this feels to quick as well and more time seeing them form a relationship would be nice. I think the time frame when they fall in love is fine but it’s the pacing and time skips that don’t add toward the reader’s investment in Dennis and Todd’s relationship. And I think all of this ends up making the ending flop, as the surprise isn’t all that shocking because it’s clear that Todd is sketchy af and it’s only time until he betrayed Dennis. That’s why I think showcasing moments where Todd is afraid to commit to his end goal might benefit the ending and possibly the whole story. Overall, I believe more could’ve been done and that the ending wouldn’t have felt lackluster to say the least.
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Tabin makes me so unbelievably angry. I’ve never had so much anger for a character in my life until this fucker waltzed in. Why the ever loving fuck is he at her house??? Why can this man ever take a single no???? She is out right telling him to get out and he little fucking entitled ass does whatever the fuck he wants! I’m so so so damn tired of this man and his blatant disregard for Sami. Every time he does something that disrespects Sami or his attempts to isolate her from other people (aka her friends), it’s like running nails on a chalkboard.
And I get that this is his character and that’s what he’s supposed to be and that I can leave and stop reading the story because of him. But at the same time, I don’t because I want to see Sami succeed and get closer with her friends and so on! It’s just Tabin is infuriating to watch and I wish he fuck off a cliff!! And some part of me feels insane because sometimes I read the comments and see barely talking how terrible this man is??? Like am I the only one losing my goddamn mind???
Recommend me male omega x female omega pairings. Doesn’t have to be on this site :)
As the son of King Yeom-ra of the underworld, Jae-shin has lived a hedonistic life full of ever-chan...
- Author: Ananas, C.R Jade
- Genres: Webtoons / Yaoi / Adult / Mature / Smut / Drama / Historical
