I consider myself something as a toxic yaoi connoisseur looking for more toxic yuri to enjoy. Because of that, I was looking forward to reading a new toxic yuri manhwa after how delicious toxic white angles have no wings was.... Only to be thoroughly disappointed how bland the story felt and unoriginal the sex felt. Objectively, if the author simply wanted to write porn I feel like there could have been more creative liberties they could have taken(such as having the security guard smuggling in toys as well beyond drugs or whatever) or simply doing something more interesting with the characters rather than what's on display here. From what I've read it feels like a typical damsel in distress scenario with a basically door mat like main character, despite the fact that she was able to get the balls to kill her abusive father. I don't think she has to be some sort of bad ass, if anything I feel like her acting meek and timid based off of the abuse she faced in her life before prison makes sense, but she should have some sort self preservation instincts that either leads her into deciding to fight back or possibly even manipulating her way to the top of the prison hierarchy based off of her unassuming demeanor. If your main issue is the sexual abuse the MC faces throughout the story, then whatever, but my main issue is that the story or even porn isn't all the interesting, I truly feel bad for all toxic yuri fans hoping to come across something truly compelling. Instead they're just stuck with something truly offensive, something boring. If you want something better written, I'd highly recommend White Angels Have No Wings
This manhwa makes me feel like pervy old man and I'm so excited to see where this will go.... Yuri is so cute.... Hurry up and become Minjun's omega for me... He's already so cute as an alpha but his cuteness levels will definitely increase after become the omega he dreams of becoming..... Also Minjun's own fall from grace is sooooo sexy too, Yuri also really knows how to style his "alpha".... The short hair style he has is such a weak point for me... Ahhhhhh this manhwa is so perfect... Thank you author for writing this and thank you translator for translating it
so real
I hate that my first thought when rereading this again was "wow, so this is how Mickey 17 came to be huh" jokingly.... it's such a good little shorty story I hope the author and artist do another beefy bottom story like this in the future!
That’s foul lmao
Just the things happening in the dark fucked up recesses of my mind
*loud gross sobbing noises* I'm not crying you are!!!! They're so sweet and cute I need me a partner like this.... A rich cute lawyer I mean
Looks promising but the translation man hopefully this gets an official translation or a proper team who will use actual people and not machine translation
God I love stupid plot lines like this, easy to turn your brain off to and the porn is good. Sometimes in your life you need to realize when something needs you to turn off your thinking brain and turn on the no thoughts head empty only stupid hentai troupes part of their brain to enjoy life to the fullest. Don't over think it, just giggle
Aaaaand the translation is back to being nearly incomprehensible I know I shouldn't expect much since this is a free and illegal manga site but I still find myself disappointed each time. Hopefully it gets a proper english release and it doesn't get touched by the machine translation curse, especially with how popular ai is getting with companies because of how cheap it is(even though it's objective way worse). This couple was so cute so I'd love to see more from this artist in the future, even if it's not following these exact characters!
Is it bad? I really can't see it. It seems decent to me. At least understandable and comfortable to read.
its was pretty good and comprehensive? ion know what level of linguistic expertise U we’re expecting but its like a totally normal translation
For clarification, what I meant, this doesn't read naturally. It reads like what a robot would translate something. Yeah, you can read it, but it doesn't have the nuances an actual human translator who knows both languages would translate the work. If you want something quick and easy, sure, use a machine and just shit something out with a robot, but like. This doesn't read naturally. At all. No one who's a native english speaker(or even non native, I would argue) would talk like that. Is it readable? Yeah I guess, but is it enjoyable to read? For me, no it's not. Thats why I want to wait for an official translation. You guys are free to enjoy machine translation, but like, there are better translations of works out there. And once you read them, and compare them to just machine translation with no effort to at the very least make things sound natural, you start to notice the difference in quality very quickly.
You guys should also not look at this too deeply from someone who have a Togainu no chi icon where Nano says, " have you tried giving up and using hard drugs". Like it's not that deep and just a personal preference of mine
I never notice these things. I wish I would tho. Reading MTLed Danmei have made me so numb to translation that I can read/make sense of anything (￣∇￣")
Need to work on my language skills ╥﹏╥.
dude i love ur icon lmao
The difference is honestly night and day, reading a translation that's just machine translated with no added effort to make more natural sounding vs an actual team of translators who know what they're doing really affects the way a story reads. Something that's passible can come off more eloquently spoken and highlight the story and even art. Please, of you have the opportunity, see if you can find a manga, manhwa, or danmei with an official translation. More times than not, a proper translation elevates your reading experience
Nigga chill i know it ain't that Deep no need for a whole statement LOOL
I ain't native speaker but this translation does feel natural to me dawg... I would never be able to tell it's mtl.... ive seen mtl and it's absolute dogshit nigga, how do you know this one is mtl made?
You're acting very rude, so all I'll say is that no native speaker would say " do I indeed look best with blonde hair?". Especially someone from New York and who's Latino. It's clearly machine translated.
For one, every sentence in past tense is actively wrong and horrible.
Just came here to check out the Malice Mizer mention, but the context that the picture of Mana and Gackt are the main character's parents are so funny, congrats on the gay son Mana and Gackt <3
Read this because the title was my birthday and it was like the author gently grabbed my face, kissed my softly, and said, "don't worry wanwan this manhwa is gonna have everything you could hope for and more, I did everything for you babe" and I couldn't be happier ლ(´ڡ`ლ)