I hate that my first thought when rereading this again was "wow, so this is how Mickey 17 came to be huh" jokingly.... it's such a good little shorty story I hope the author and artist do another beefy bottom story like this in the future!
That’s foul lmao
Just the things happening in the dark fucked up recesses of my mind
*loud gross sobbing noises* I'm not crying you are!!!! They're so sweet and cute I need me a partner like this.... A rich cute lawyer I mean
Looks promising but the translation man hopefully this gets an official translation or a proper team who will use actual people and not machine translation
God I love stupid plot lines like this, easy to turn your brain off to and the porn is good. Sometimes in your life you need to realize when something needs you to turn off your thinking brain and turn on the no thoughts head empty only stupid hentai troupes part of their brain to enjoy life to the fullest. Don't over think it, just giggle
Aaaaand the translation is back to being nearly incomprehensible I know I shouldn't expect much since this is a free and illegal manga site but I still find myself disappointed each time. Hopefully it gets a proper english release and it doesn't get touched by the machine translation curse, especially with how popular ai is getting with companies because of how cheap it is(even though it's objective way worse). This couple was so cute so I'd love to see more from this artist in the future, even if it's not following these exact characters!
Is it bad? I really can't see it. It seems decent to me. At least understandable and comfortable to read.
its was pretty good and comprehensive? ion know what level of linguistic expertise U we’re expecting but its like a totally normal translation
For clarification, what I meant, this doesn't read naturally. It reads like what a robot would translate something. Yeah, you can read it, but it doesn't have the nuances an actual human translator who knows both languages would translate the work. If you want something quick and easy, sure, use a machine and just shit something out with a robot, but like. This doesn't read naturally. At all. No one who's a native english speaker(or even non native, I would argue) would talk like that. Is it readable? Yeah I guess, but is it enjoyable to read? For me, no it's not. Thats why I want to wait for an official translation. You guys are free to enjoy machine translation, but like, there are better translations of works out there. And once you read them, and compare them to just machine translation with no effort to at the very least make things sound natural, you start to notice the difference in quality very quickly.
You guys should also not look at this too deeply from someone who have a Togainu no chi icon where Nano says, " have you tried giving up and using hard drugs". Like it's not that deep and just a personal preference of mine
I never notice these things. I wish I would tho. Reading MTLed Danmei have made me so numb to translation that I can read/make sense of anything (￣∇￣")
Need to work on my language skills ╥﹏╥.
dude i love ur icon lmao
The difference is honestly night and day, reading a translation that's just machine translated with no added effort to make more natural sounding vs an actual team of translators who know what they're doing really affects the way a story reads. Something that's passible can come off more eloquently spoken and highlight the story and even art. Please, of you have the opportunity, see if you can find a manga, manhwa, or danmei with an official translation. More times than not, a proper translation elevates your reading experience
Nigga chill i know it ain't that Deep no need for a whole statement LOOL
I ain't native speaker but this translation does feel natural to me dawg... I would never be able to tell it's mtl.... ive seen mtl and it's absolute dogshit nigga, how do you know this one is mtl made?
You're acting very rude, so all I'll say is that no native speaker would say " do I indeed look best with blonde hair?". Especially someone from New York and who's Latino. It's clearly machine translated.
For one, every sentence in past tense is actively wrong and horrible.
Just came here to check out the Malice Mizer mention, but the context that the picture of Mana and Gackt are the main character's parents are so funny, congrats on the gay son Mana and Gackt <3
I was excited to see a new upload of this, and fore it to get some better translations as well, but everything 35 and beyond is just scrambled pages and bad machine translation at best, deeply disappointing, so here to hoping this will get an official release at some point. Again.
To the presumed 14 year who commented on my last comment that I blocked calling me sick, I'm gonna read this again and have the same exact thoughts! I wish there was some shota top action but it was cute and fluffy regardless! <3 Anyone who has a problem with that fact probably shouldn't be reading a shotacon manga but I guess you're always gonna have people who complain about shoes being in a shoe store tbh ¯_(ツ)_/¯ you guys would probably have more fun playing fortnite or something than digging up older comments and getting angry over lines, but have fun in your horrible self inducing anxiety cult that you so love.
Dear lord
What is blood talking about wut does being 14 and playing Fortnite have anything to do with them calling you sick because you wanted to see prepubescent characters committing sex acts that literally borders pedophillia and wut cult I’m so confused
Each time someone comments on this I get more powerful because it just proves I'm right why are you guys coming to a shotacon manga and getting mad? It's fictional baby. It's crazy how you guys can't put two and two together It'd be like me getting angry at hentai manga just because it's got some weird fetish I hate and people are talking about how they wish there was more of this fetish. Why are you guys purposely doing this to yourselves? Because it make you feel better about that fact that you secretly like this stuff? It's a fictional fetish, you're allowed to enjoy this stuff in fiction, you're quite literally not hurting anyone. But I guess you're all not old enough or not paying attention enough in class to know this :/ but I we live in a world now where fictional violence is more acceptable than any type of fictional sex. Have fun being weird as fuck Puritans
I'm all not going to respond to any comments from now on, and blocking everyone who does from now on. Also, just so you guys do know,
if any of you kids tell me to off myself, these things CAN require legal action and no amount of being a minor can save you from that. I'm also not afraid to report this site again to mutiple publishers about it hosting illegal websites just because you guys don't know how to behave. Grow up and learn to not read things you hate and have to have thing spoon feed to you, and have to feel that in order to show how morally good you are you go to everything that you think is illegal(news flash, if it was publishers wouldn't be publishing this) and commenting in how you read this but you know it was evil virtue signaling in it's finest form
I was going to agree with you until that part about playing fortnite and calling everyone kids... You are behaving exactly like them all haha So I suppose you're also a kid? Though, nothing wrong with that, we're reading a manga about kids love, so I guess it's fine
Goofy ass pedophile no one is getting into legal trouble for telling you to off yourself on an illegal manga website. Do you think people haven't reported the site multiple times in the past?? Yet it's still up, but go ahead and attempt to ruin it for everyone because you're sad that you're being shamed for wanting to see prepubescent characters having sex.
thanks for telling us you are a pedo!!!
This manhwa makes me feel like pervy old man and I'm so excited to see where this will go.... Yuri is so cute.... Hurry up and become Minjun's omega for me... He's already so cute as an alpha but his cuteness levels will definitely increase after become the omega he dreams of becoming..... Also Minjun's own fall from grace is sooooo sexy too, Yuri also really knows how to style his "alpha".... The short hair style he has is such a weak point for me... Ahhhhhh this manhwa is so perfect... Thank you author for writing this and thank you translator for translating it
so real