Taking away from the fact the dynamic of the couple is problematic or whatever I felt no chemistry between the two anyway. Next thing ik they are saying I love you to each other.
Plus I could of cared less about a 2nd couple in this story.
I really like the story but the timeline jump really confused me at first. In the beginning I was like wdym "her children has children"? It would have less confusing if they added like a "20 years later" thing. I don't remember seeing one in the manga, but maybe the author didn't add one as some type of metaphorical symbolism of living eternally because Adain was confused like the rest of us. (It's probs a reach but it could have not been added on purpose.)
yeah thats probably what the author was trying to do; making the narrative seem as if it was yesterday to signify the character's perception of time, toying with the idea of an unreliable narrator/pov
The craziest thing is that they did this in the office but ig that's one of the kinks too.
Bro this story gives you a headache, I'll tell you that... Whiplash after whiplash
Apt I dont even know what's going on.
FRRR & thats what happens when they cut the story off for THIRTEEN MONTHS in the middle of a cliffhanger like the way nobody can gaf about the supposed tense scene anymore lmaoooooo
APT, APT, APT, JUST MEET ME AT THE
sorry
May Castillo's love for Penelope find me in life. Amen. Hallelujah, etc, etc....
They BOTH need serious therapy. One is doing self harm, the other stopped eating and became ultra paranoid. It is a good story, but the author couldn't stretch it out to a couple of extra chapters to end it? I get there will be side stories, but those are SIDE STORIES. Idk man.... endings should usually be impactful or fulfilling like something has came to a close. Just an OPINION tho.
Its ok he's a little slow. It adds to the charm ig. All those hints in his face and he doesn't get it.