what?? She didn't feel comfortable with anyone but Setsu? That's why she went to him in the time of need?? She loved Setsu and rejected the other guy. She only ever wanted to be with him... just because they are left behind as a female and male doesn't mean they have to get together
like there is no reason for her to like him except that they survived together.
He's not bad but
either she loved Setsu or not.
for good story telling and character development, this is what they mean
manga nowadays forgot about the power a scene can have (because they can't draw?)
No really the power and epicness of some scenes never fail
is so poorly written i had to laugh
I actually find myself agreeing with you. Ive seen some comments bout how this is rare or something? But it seems pretty typical to me. Pacing is awkward and rushed and Im not really seeing the point of having them be reborn. And also the introduction of their superpower was like wot. Super sudden and convenient (also a good way to describe alotta stuff in this mangalol). Seems a little everywhere. Yeah so pretty much you typical fantasy reborn stuff, super rushed, with not so good execution. Also the way the killed off the mother was so... *sigh* like they couldnt even come up with a believable death, like something more to do with drinking
To me the worst was the depiction of their abuse, like if they want us to feel empathatic etc they have to say less and show more fitting scenes.. authors only use a lot of words if they can't properly depict the situation via the image
like the scene has to be darker, the pain more visible?? this is a serious topic?? it looks like a 12 year old did this
also the ' oh we're so brave for putting up with it ' don't try to tell us, show us like it just seems like they're trying too hard to convince us and ' oh no we're so used to abuse we flinchhh ' you don't have to say it?? It's obvious? The more the author describes every superficial scene the less power it has like .... the author needs to grow up, read some good old manga and find a brain
I feel like it's more what Id imagine someone who has never gone through abuse would depict it as, so obviously it lacks depth (like everything else in the story lol). The imma use words and spell everything out to you instead of just showing it properly, I find is also a common problem with a lot of manga. I dont think this manga knows what tone or direction it's going for so it just does all of them. Like concerning the abuse, you could either throughly cover it and depict everything, or omit those scenes altogether and imply that it is going on in the background based on their actions and behaviour. But yeah, author isnt sure where its going so sorta half commits to showing it and it doesnt work well. The whole thing just lacks class I find.
exactly.
I dropped this piece in the middle of the bullsh*t of the maincouple and thought I'd give this another chance but the madness of the sidecouple hit rock bottom
like i don't have words it's so disgusting but the people who read and comment like they enjoyed it- THAT's just a whole new breed
I was angry at Woojin for pushing him around then and there that to one point he cried confessing his feelings but when Woojin said ' in the end it's all for him ' then it HIT me
like no words could express,, he did his best and he wasn't capable of anything better
and their fucking TIGHT bond that they just really REALLY need each other like YOOO
fuck they're so broken and insecure and... deserve so much more .... it gets me everytime
yes, they're cute and all but i HATE that it's forced.. that people have so much power over them and succeed in making them kneel like that ESPECIALLY if she has never been loved (as she said) by those who now want to force her!!
If they don't fake divorce or their marriage becomes a thorn in the eyes of those who planned this.... i cannot bear seeing these ***** reach their goal.
YES, they may have a reason, it's for her own good, she already loved him? bla bla,,, BUT they are defying her human rights, they go too far.. she deserves her opinion to be respected and to go her own way.
so he really let her be raped? Like he didn't rape her himself? That's some new level bullshit?? this is so fucked up i just really have to stop my brain and think as time goes on she enjoys it bc otherwise-
the flow is so off, way too fast
she should blame herself more etc?? Not just smile in the same chapter??
They were reincarnated
pretty sure he passed away and she followed him the first life