' Linda wouldn't let her', um, what? Who is the employee? Geez, obnoxious.. I haven't minded the FL's lackadaisical attitude so far... but this is getting my neck throbbing. I can understand that it's unclear the best approach for dealing with the CP, and other's like him, but her servant ? Telling her what to do? I would think that could understand is a big NO.
I have no idea why this story devolved into something so aimless and boring.. but have fun everyone. I'm out
to see her delusional thoughts... we all know they're going to get her more humiliation.. I'm getting my popcorn
I'm not talking about the dry s*x, that happens all the time in yaoi... I'm talking about his mothers abuse, and his partner is ok with it to. UGH.. This is driving other cultures up the wall..
I really like it, except for the MC's black dot eyes.. I don't get why they are like that, unless it's suppose to be part of the story somehow.. if it's just an artistic decision to make her quirky, I don't know why honestly, but I just can't like it. No feelings in the eyes, is probably why, but also, it just looks fake and pulls me out of the story.
I found that epilogue so annoying. Why would you play games with your partner you just got after a long time? I've seen this kind of epilogue before, I wish authors would stop copying each other and think of something new. That was an exercise in frustration reading that, not entertaining to me at all.
After watching a sincere story, it's feels off to see a story about 'sponsoring', begging for it, and with a character I liked previously.. if I am right, isn't the seme the guy who was a good friend to the MC when he first was in trouble and left the group?
But the art is just stunning! The story looks interesting... I like omegaverse, but get tired of some aspects of it. Def. giving this a chance for the art alone tho.
This is the one I wait for..Altho, it's funny, I never recognize the thumbnail ( still) haha.. I'm clicking on other things then I go 'WAIT A MINUTE!' It's here!
That chapter was a mess really.. It prob needs to be looked at and re-uploaded. sorry.
Second, wow, that was just a weird side road she took about "Rick".. I'm not saying it's impossible to think of that as a possibility , I'm saying it grows old to have 'Americans' thrown under the bus again . There are gay people all over the world. Some are just more suppressed. Doesn't mean they're not there. And it follows that he might be gay because he had lots of relationships with women? ╮(￣▽￣)╭ I'm tired.
he's pregnant.. And even tho they are 'dating' they aren't really a full blown couple in love with each other.. So it will prob create some awkwardness. I'm just guessing everything tho.
The minute she had to go to the bathroom , I knew she would be met with that redhead coming back.. bummer.. I hope this gets updated soon so we are put out of our misery:)
It's really good. The story and art.. the characters are well written. I can't wait for more.
of all the things she wants to do after living through that is to try and smoke a cigarette? geez... I am having so much trouble respecting her character, this is just one more let down for me personally, not fun entertainment. I also wonder why she can't just borrow money in her ex's name and pay off the debt she got from him? Perhaps because they're not married.. but I would enjoy a story where she looks for a way to dump his debt back on him.
This story looks interesting and I'm loving the art ( I recognized right away from Max) but I'd like to ask: Am I supposed to understand at this point what and why there was a problem between them years ago at the pool? Why does the mc think he's done something that could be thought of as wrong and feels slightly apologetic until it starts getting intense between them. I don't understand, unless that it part of the reveal later.. then I'm find with waiting, and character growth.. all part of what makes a story interesting.
