Kiyotake's Topics (853)

in an alternate universe with no mcqueen and if chang wasn't evil and had a normal job but the rest remained the same that'd be one hell of a story (if chang realized he was in love with ed and repented) SO weak for the asshole seme falls for uke and changes completely for them trope. chang is the hottest

wow this is the perfect mix of romance, comedy (a lot of hilarious little scenes and comments and cuteness from the couple) and sexiness i love it so much. i hope there is more!

they just gotta fuck out their feelings, give em time

i hope the story wasn't cut short! i really need more closure than this but i'm happy for them.

only star park and fan boy the purest bois in the world would have a fight because they love each other too much

it's really weird because i adore the main couple so much, but feel nothing for the other couples. i guess this is really a situation where they needed to be introduced in a lengthier way - we kind of just jumped into their stories and it lost the build up. i hate to say it because i in no way want to criticize the author because she's so amazing and i'm so grateful for this lovely story, i just can't muster any feelings for the side couples

oh great my baby is crying again.. I'M OVER THIS (╯°Д °)╯╧╧(╯°Д °)╯╧╧ (╯°Д °)╯╧╧

i cringed so hard reading the last part of the chapter - imagine being the friends watching Akino eyefucking Megiuro. AWKWARD AS HECK. it's hard for me to take this story serious bc Akino is such a child. Time to go back and read the delinquent brother series!

i google translated poorly the extras










extra 1) shows a flashback of them in school, they have a relay race and ayame is participating and he grabs shuu who thinks he's scary and ayame says to him it can only be you!!! flashforward to the present and they are on their way home and it's raining. shuu asks ayame in the taxi why ayame picked him (i don't know what he's asking he picked him for - maybe for the race? maybe for a work project?) and ayame gives him a disappointing response i think and shuu is sulking and they flashback to the past again and for the relay race ayame's instructions (he has to pick an instruction and complete it to complete the race) is to finish the race with the one he loves. so he grabs shuu and his thoughts are something like "it can only be you" or maybe "it's always only been you"

extra 2) they talk about pheromones in the start of the chapter - i think ayame is going on a business trip to do research on pheromones, probably on how to control them. he goes to korea for 2 weeks and comes back with the spicy noodles shuu asked him for (and there is a super cute panel of his return - shuu is a little anxious because ayame is late and wonders if he's still drinking with colleagues - ayame comes home and shuu goes over and huggles him and ayame carries him like a koala). shuu tells the noodles i've been waiting for you these last two weeks!!! kid ayame asks if shuu was waiting for him or the noodles and shuu says i was waiting for you senpai! ayame walks away and shuu goes and backhugs him and tells him please pay attention to me, i was waiting for you, i felt so lonely without you. i think ayame says something like how should i pay attention to you... and they have sexy time. shuu begs during sexy time i think for ayame to fill him up to make up for the two weeks they haven't seen each other and says a buuuunch of mushy stuff and ayame simply says "yes" and there's maybe some more text in a few more cuts from shuu showing kaede/kikyo and shuu/ayame hugging to end the chapter

anyone have working raws?