i wonder if this storyboard was originally twice as long and they were forced to make cuts? would explain the jump cuts. also in this chapter alone we missed two sex scenes - once after they confess to each other and another when they (!!!!!!!!!) moved in together i think!!!!! but, this story has my entire heart. their feelings are so palpable. I do think some of the seme's actions weren't explained that well like his comment when the uke had the pregnancy test?? like????? but maybe it just didn't translate well. over than that it was beautiful. looking forward to the extras!!! and thank you so much for translating this amazing piece!
where can we read the smex scenesヾ(☆▽☆)
sorry for the confusion! they're not available to read as far as i know, i just think chunks of the story were cut out! there is a sex scene in the extra that hasn't been translated yet!
hope it gets translated soon ╥﹏╥
ultimately i accept everything about this manhua, but i could do without the dark side of the story :( i just want the fluffs!
I actually think the dark parts in this manga kinda make the story more balanced. If it was all just floofs and fulfs with no drama. I feel like it would be kinda boring because, you know when a story is good when it has you wanting to know what's gonna happen ASAP! but if it's just all sugar plums and gumdrops then we'll know what's gonna happen next chapter, Just more and more and more floof. I don't mind that but I think some suspension in floof manga like these make it more balanced and amazing! Idk but that's just my opinion :)
So many likes and dislikes
Please no. Without the dark parts it would be a boring ass soft porn yaoi. I prefer the dark parts myself but the fluffy porn is like a treat.
oh wow! my most controversial post to date lol. well if it's worth anything, I get very emotionally/mentally disturbed by anything dark. This is why I don't watch horror movies, EVER. I'm feint of heart. But if it's very well written I'll still read it, it just gives me unnecessary anxiety
what about the safetly of floof??? like the best smell!!! but i get the balance thing - but does it need to be opposite spectrums haha.
Too floofy gets very boring very easily. But different strokes and all...
Agree.
what's with all the dislikes Σ(っ°Д °;)っ
I don't know why but so far glasses senpai is my least favorite character in the story. Somehow he seems so detached and emotionless to me, no matter what he says, the feeling doesn't reach his expression, he seems to have cold eyes. Maybe i'm misreading
"throw it til you call me daddy" confirmed little mo wants to top
a daddy can bottom *smirks*
okay that's really cute and all and it's the thought that counts but yohan PLEASE exchange for your size my ocd is kicking in
isn't it also uncomfortable having a ring sitting half way down your finger too? lmao
He'll probably wear as pinky ring! Hopefully or as a necklace
OMG SAME I JUST CAN'T
GUYS YOU KNOW HE'S JUST GOING TO LOSE THE RING (if this was real life)
senpai is going to hit him and yell the next day and we'll continue this for another 10 volumes. it's not that i don't appreciate sensei getting back into this manga after feeling lost and continuing but at some point we should reach the END right? with closure? it seems so far away.
lihuan is a true MAN. and yuyang deserves the world.
Lihuan deserves the world! (づ￣ ³￣)づ
GUYS i'm re-reading and i had forgotten i was 100% looking forward to and forgot since it's been a while a chapter dedicated to all of ayame's expressions and reactions to shuu that shuu missed but we never got that in the end!!
1) when shuu said he never wanted to see ayame again during sex we only see ayame's back - would be beautifully devastating to see his tortured expression
2) when he tells shuu he will never bear his child regarding the pregnancy test - i want to see REGRET on ayame's face after that JEEZ MAN WOT YOU DOIN
3) shuu is in heat/sick and at ayame's house hugging a plushie (mamu-chan) from ayame's place which ayame momentarily snatches from him but lets him hold in the end - was there any significance to this??? maybe in the past he meant to give it to shuu but couldn't pluck up the courage so now has just been holding onto it. there's also a later scene that shuu buys a keychain mamu chan for ayame and a flashback of ayame and his brother talking in the past while he throws mamu in the air- must have meant something!
4) shuu asks ayame out to lunch and you can see ayame blushing from the back - would love to see his giddy face
5) all da sex when they confessed it the latest chap.
edit: 6) the rooftop garden story - i wonder if Ayame ever watched Shuu taking care of the plants but never felt that he could interject during Shuu's precious ritual. and then in the last chapter Shuu invites him to do it together - would explain Ayame's shocked expression when Shuu first brings him in!
SO MANY CUT SCENES. SO SAD.
did they end up together but without ayame marking shuu?
I think the plushie is Ayame’s favourite. Shuu learnt that after coming to his house, so he bought Ayame the key chain later. When he had his heat at Ayame’s house, he was clinging onto it for comfort and Ayame gave up his plushie for him, which is such a cute gesture :)
If you have seen the sketches of their baby, he wants to be like daddy and he loves Mamu-chan too.
yes :) both ayame/kaede and also shuu's dad don't agree wit hthe omegaverse system. they want to give their partners the freedom of choice to stay with them, so shuu's dad never bit his mom, and ayame basically in the last chapter proposed in his own way to shuu in the conversation they have about not pairing. it's intensely romantic!!
yes! I was wondering if there was a cut story though for why Ayame likes the plush. it seems very randomly interjected - maybe just for fun and they have cute little interactions for it - but since everyone Ayame has done in life is for Shuu, I wouldn't be surprised if there is missing backstory on it!!! like when they went to school together maybe Ayame dragged Shuu to go play arcade games and they won the plush but Shuu thinking Ayame was bullying him said he didn't want it. or something else - i think there's possible backstory we're missing!
I see it as a cute addition to his personality (look at this super hot guy in spectacular bespoke suit, at home he collects plushie :p). btw you can absolutely start a fanfic on those ideas!
so i've been obsessed with this series and i stalked the author's twitter - i think you're right!!!! there's a drawing she made of baby ayame and kaede and ayame is hugging the plushie! and their mom is looking at them like omg adorable! and then it cuts to a picture of them in like high school lookin all punk and manly/grumpy and she's so disappointed hahah. but you were right!! (ps totally go stalk her twitter she made sooo many cute little extras for the series)
We should start a Hanagara Tsumi appreciation club together! Lol and I’m already a follower of her Twitter. Do you notice small details like Sumire (their son’s name) has a black Mamu-chan plushie? Before getting the keychain from Shuu Ayame hadn’t known that there’s black Mamu-chan. I bet they have a collection at home now :p