I read this like 10 years ago. I remember thinking this was cute. I was wrong. This isn't cute. Elsa "You can't marry a man you just met" will not approve this. Also, this is a crime. Human trafficking? A scam? Grandfather, you a criminal, Sir. You lied and then poor baby got verbally abused and then raped after his wedding. ALSO!! WHO TAUGHT THAT PRINCE MANNERS? I HAVE WORDS. Also Kairi, my child, you gullible little boy, who gets paid that much money for a housekeeping job?? Istg.
Up until chapter 98, it was going well. Then it went haywire. I mean chaos. Literal chaos. There were just so many plot holes that the story was barely holding on. I feel like the author or whoever wrote this, lost control of the story and just let it run its course. It felt rushed, tbh. I have so many questions. I don't know if this has a novel, if it does, can someone please tell me? I want these gaps in the story filled and answered.
The story is good, it's just badly? poorly? written. It's all over the place. The pacing, the transitions...they're messy. Not to mention, the many plot holes. However, this has potential. I like that they're communicating, and that this has it's flair of lightheartedness. Overall, it's not a bad read.
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Istg. I get it. Jjk is the epitome of asshole, douchebag, non- biodegradable trash. But reading on his past, taking in his personality?? His being? I can understand why it's so hard for him to say SORRY. Nobody taught him how to apologize. I'm not defending him people, I'm just saying. There are people who don't know or find it hard to say sorry. Like me. It took me a long time to learn how to properly apologize. So we make it up in ways we know how. In Jjk's case, still being an ass but little less so. Hahahaha. It's bad, I know. I mean, really, do any of us really know if what KD wants is an apology?? I doubt I'd be happy to hear a sorry from Jjk's mouth. I'd punch him straight to his grave. I'd rather he show it to me. Not to say I'd let bygones be bygones, but I'd at least give him the benefit of the doubt. But yes, this redemption arc is still starting on an iffy note. But props to jjk for trying? I guess??
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This is driving me mad.