Alright, the rape part and "you allowed it" was not okay, I really hope BLs will move away from this sort of thing.
Still, this was so good, the beginning was sweet, but the ending, urgh... it HIT LIKE A TRUCK. Makes you really think about how game-changing a good ending is, most BLs start interesting and lose fire at the end
And can anybody talk about the COMPOSITION! You know when the art is so good you feel like you could walk inside it?
I know ML being an asshole is intentional, but this feels a little too close to my experiences with self-righteous abusive men . Violent, pushing and pulling MC around like a doll, justifying by saying he knows 'better' or that because he 'cares'. I only hope this builds up to something worth it and not just randomly brush it off by introducing a 'worse' villain










Kiran if he don't want you, come to me