
There was a lot of victim-blaming going on in this, basically blaming the uke for the sexual harassment and attempted rape he suffered, like it was his fault. He could have a one night stand with the whole campus and the harassment still wouldn't have been justified, it wasn't something he "brought on himself"
And just because he's lonely the story shouldn't lead to him settling for a STALKER. It's not uncommon for yaoi to be bullshit when it comes to real consequences for sex offenders and stalkers but the seme didn't even have any sort of forced redemption. The fact he went back to stalking the uke 2 days after getting dead rejected is brought as a joke like "haha he couldn't hold back"

Seowoo shouldn't have asked Jaewoo to pretend to be him, that's just lying to Ohn and that's the wrong way to start a relationship, but he never asked his brother to make passes in his stead.
Seowoo just wanted an opportunity to be closer to Ohn as a friend, not a boyfriend. As a person that also lives with anxiety I understand what Seowoo is scared of even though I wouldn't use I method like that. I already feel burdened meeting new people, if I had lived sheltered like Seowoo I would have even more difficulties.
Talk about Seowoo's mistakes but don't act like Jaewoo is free of guilt. In the first place, Jaewoo could have rejected if he really wanted to, he didn't think it was wrong, he just thought it was a pain.
Aside from that, for me the worst part as someone who has sisters is the way Jaewoo flirted with someone his brother likes. This is not a case of friends liking the same person, they are brothers. Jaewoo was already flirting with Ohn before having any kind of feelings even. Then he purposely got in Seowoo's way when he was feeling ready to make progress on his own.
Also, it's wrong to say Ohn only likes Seowoo because of the time spent with Jaewoo, he felt closer to Seowoo after he revealed that he was also bullied in the past.
For me either Ohn should end with Seowoo - after showing growth, facing his brother, revealing the truth to Ohn and owning up to it - or neither.

Black haired guy's imprinting is YSH, which fits our MC (Yeon Sooha), but I noticed it also fits Sooha's snapback friend, Yoo Sahyun.
My guess is we're going to have conflict and misunderstanding between those three at some point and...
[SPOILER]
In chapter 5 Sooha's imprinting is visible for the first time, the initials are GHB, not CEW (Calix Elle Ward), I wonder where this is going...

Shinwoo is just a piece of shit. Want to go with Taesoo? Go for it, but break up first, Sebin deserves better.
When that girl hit on Sebin in the gym he didn't even bat an eye and stated clearly he was already dating someone. He waited for Shinwoo and went to pick him up.
In comparison, Shinwoo denied Sebin was his boyfriend when he got his text about the handcuffs, he wanted to cheat from the start and didn't hesitate.
Damn, he even told his friends about the cheating, he's making a joke out of a good guy that actually loves him just to be fucked by the dude he was into 7 years ago and could get bored of him anytime.

Many small details were not explained properly like the friend who works for a game company and how the rumors of Yuzuru dating the director spread.
I think it's partly due to bad translation, the dialog was messy sometimes, but the author didn't help either.
Chapter 5 should be a climax and enlighten us about Yuzuru's identity but instead the author introduced two new characters that were not important or at least didn't have to be shown for us to understand the story.
In chapter 6 we'll probably get the explanation of how Yuzuru became a character in the game, that could have been done in chapter 5 instead, leaving more pages to conclusion and romance. Now chapter 6 will probably be rushed.

I actually think Tsutomu's family took an important roles in here, as they're the ones that made him remember that he actually know Yuzuru from the past, which leads him to feel guilty and now he wants to redeem himself to Yuzuru. I think the next chapter will talk about Yuzuru's perspective like when did he remembered Tsutomu is his childhood friend, and when did he start to like him. I think Yuzuru's identity might be confusing, but I think the author wants to make it self-explainetory, because he said that he worked on a project about the dating sim and that Tsutomu is a client, so we can assume that Yuzuru might be working in a game company and that he probably agreed to be a model for the game character.
As for the rumors, Tsutomu probably assumes that the company president spreads those rumors because he fancies Yuzuru.
Hope that explains some of the confusion (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ
Sorry tho if it's not that good, english isn't my first language t-t
The dick was so big that it wouldn't get inside in the first try but in the second they didn't change anything but the position, and still they expected it to go in?
The seme might be taking his time because he wants to meet again, but how can an experienced uke not try some stretching with a plug.
There's not even a scene with them putting on lub, not even the classic panel with just the ripped wrapping laying around on the bed. Are we just supposed to assume that they did it off panel even tho there are no clues or is it a case of they really didn't do it at all? First option is bad storytelling, second option makes them look DUMB.