Hmm ... interesting story from what I can guess of it, but the translation is not working out well. It's unintelligible in places, and adds the wrong kind of comedy. (Wrong kind = the kind that wasn't intended to be comic.)
Agreed, think I will wait for a while to see if a different translation comes out, also, the new short hair makes me sad, love long haired characters LOL
Lots of manga coming up today with that chapter break in just that one particular spot ...
Is the older brother poisoning him?
I think Kei, who knows his older brother the best out of anyone, realizes that Masayuki is being poisoned by Takano.
Wait FRL?
Isn't it just too weird how Masayuki keeps collapsing with stomach aches whenever Takano gets near him? Especially after eating or drinking things. And that whole business with the prima donna and her food was clearly sabotage. I think Takano wants that company more than he's letting on. The whole smiley-faced business is starting to look a little fake.
I see I see. You've got a point there. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Of course, it might just be irritable bowel syndrome aggravated by stress ... pfft.
I'm pretty sure he's being "poisoned" - even if it's only mentally. Be it out of spite or unawareness, he's being kept in a poisonous loop which can only result in him collapsing or bolting for it (the latter would be preferable and the healthier solution).
Him being able to stand up for himself and setting boundaries for others to notice would be far off as he's been kept on that leash for so long. He's like an elephant trained by heavy chains and kept with a flimsy rope at the end. He'd need rest and a safe harbour to aquire the mindset needed to break free on his own volition.
But well, that's just my own take on this fictional character, and the goal the author has in mind surely differs from the one I'd project ^^
That's a very subtle story line for most yaoi, and I really like that. From the heft and swing of emotional saturation so far (to use a confusing analogy), I doubt this mangaka goes for the overly subtle approach. But, hey! One never knows. If it happens, I, for one, will be giggling like a little girl.
Damn, no spankings! What a waste of a perfectly good military uniform fetish.
Im with ya
"I'm a little concerned that my love for you is screwed up and could harm you."
"Yeah. Me, too, but at least I know it is love, so that's okay. Do you need some time? Or do you want to continue?"
There, fixed it for you boys.
If the song "'Lied eines jungen Wachpostens" which Deitrich immortalized as "Lilli Marleen" is supposed to have symbolic importance or foreshadowing, then this is going to be one hell of a tragedy. One of the biggest tearjerkers of all time. Just saying.
OTOH, what am I thinking. It's yaoi. Probably just a Dietrich fetish.
YOu know I totally agree with you on that. I mean I am looking forward to read more and hope it will be one hell of manga.
Yeah, even if it's a tearjerker, it's one written and illustrated by Zaria, so it will probably be a good one: campy, emotionally overwrought, stretched plot devices and all ... but entertaining and sexy as anything.
whatever it is I am so ready for it.
This manga is complete. For years, the final chapter was posted on this site. I don't know who took it down or why, but it has been removed. But somebody did it. Bloody vandals.