well I'm disappointed. I was like the name sounds cute. Didn't think to look at comments or tags.
I hate shit like this. Like big guy can fight and suddenly he can't keep a kid off him. Also rape.
Totally, no, don't touch em. But the end commentary got me laughing.
hmmm, so far boring. Like it's rushing to hit every cliche. Ded, manga, villain, not related brother, how to avoid?? I havent learned a single thing about the story itself! Don't have much hope for it. Especially when you go around and read stories with similar themes and does well.
Well, isn't the entire point of the first chapter in anything "ordinary" (and tbh quite boring) to just set up the background.
The author's just rushing to start the story itself.
There are better ways to set up background. Executions is boring with lack of substance. And considering how many are out there now, it definitely lacks a good impression. And honestly first chapters dont have to explain everything
Well this is just the first chapter and first chapters aren’t always impressive or good. I would at least wait until 5 or 10 chapters before i really criticize it. I doubt this will ever be updated tho.
That was unexpected and hilarious. First doom and gloom then pudding then all better!
I am still reading but I can't seem to get myself to like the FL. And I hate Noah.. I feel like I'm not getting enough from the story to invest where it's headed.
Am debating. Mainly cuz it's her murdere but love????
Just looked at first chapter. I don't think he is the murderer. Hmmm
I was curious as to what this is. BUT, comments tell me I am not gunna even try to look.
My curiousity wins me over and.... I totally friggin regret it. I lost my appetite...