
this story reminds me of what middle schoolers think sex is like and they put together a weird story to tell their friends about how sex is and then it just ends up as weird censorship and a story line that’s worse than the author’s anatomy drawing skills *sigh*

the plot and story would be perfect if they kept them from doing it for a while and actually let the tension build while they try to understand their relationship from hating eachother to potentially loving eachother, like the little funny misunderstandings would have been perfect but idk the story got off track so bad kinda saddens me it had potential.
BAHHAHAA HIS FACE IMAGINE